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Name: TeamCedric (Signed) · Date: 06/15/13 13:13 · For: Chapter 1
I think you've captured the voice of an 11-year-old girl in her first week at boarding school perfectly! (I've been one, so I know.) Of course she repeats herself but there are subtle changes depending on who she's writing to, and she talks about what is first and foremost in her mind; it's just like she's scribbling stuff down in a hurry before she's off to the next thing, so it's not going to be a studied critique of her classes. So there! Now write some more!

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I've never been to boarding school so this was quite difficult to write but I imagined it would be a lot like letters from summer camp haha. And yes, I will write some more. Not of this fic but I have a HUGE novel in progress right now so stay tuned ;) ~Cassie

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I've never been to boarding school so this was quite difficult to write but I imagined it would be a lot like letters from summer camp haha. And yes, I will write some more. Not of this fic but I have a HUGE novel in progress right now so stay tuned ;) ~Cassie


Name: Chocolate butterbeer (Signed) · Date: 03/24/13 15:14 · For: Chapter 1
That was really cute
I'm not sure lily would realisticly be put on the team but it was cute it would be interesting to see what everyone wrote back


Name: crbluvsravenclaw (Signed) · Date: 07/02/12 22:32 · For: Chapter 1
It was okay. I understand how Lily is writing to everyone in the family, but she is just repeating the same things. I enjoyed some of it, though. As for Quidditch, it starts in November, not September... And what about all the other classes? You only mentioned Charms, Transfiguration, and History Of Magic. I don't want to put you in a bad mood and I apologize for doing so, but this is what I have to say...(: update soon because I'm nit giving up on you...(:

Author's Response: Finally! Something other than "it was very sweet"! As much as I love compliments, I need to know what I can improve on! Looking back on it now, I realize how repetitive it is. It originally was going to be multiple chapters and go through at least two months, and a lot of loose ends weren't tied up. For example, I knew I wanted her to be Seeker, but being lazy, didn't think about the dates, Paige Taylor was going to have a bigger role, and more classes were going to be mentioned. I'm most likely not updating this story, but I have a few WIPs, so stay tuned! - RavenclawHeadGirl :)


Name: Fiffer Haliwell (Signed) · Date: 06/09/12 23:19 · For: Chapter 1
this made me smile. It was very sweet. I greatly enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)


Name: mppfangirl1960 (Signed) · Date: 05/14/12 18:56 · For: Chapter 1
Adorable. :)

Author's Response: Thanks :)


Name: ThatHPFan (Signed) · Date: 05/11/12 23:10 · For: Chapter 1
Wow, this is so cool!! Please do more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do have several WIP, one of which is a letter fic, but not anytime soon :)


Name: Snidgetgirl (Signed) · Date: 05/11/12 21:32 · For: Chapter 1
I loved it! I think that you got everything just right! Are you going to write more? I'd read it! Oh, and by the way, you're right, aliens don't wear hats... :)

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much! I do have several works in progress, but no letter fics any time soon :)


Name: kheldar (Signed) · Date: 05/11/12 19:09 · For: Chapter 1
Very cute! I always enjoy "letter" stories, it's a fun way to get to know the characters. Planning on writing any more, or just the first week?

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love reading letter stories too, but writing them is hard! I'm pretty sure I'm only doing Lily's first week but I'm thinking about other letter fics, most likely not next-gen. -RavenclawHeadGirl :)


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