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Reviews For An Air that Kills

Name: Theloonyhermione (Signed) · Date: 07/01/12 20:05 · For: Chapter 1
This was a good story, though I found nothing amazing or shocking about it. Only one mistake I found, though, was where Snape said about Hogwarts, "everybody goes there," because there are more wizarding schools, not just Hogwarts.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm sorry you didn't find it to be amazing, but glad you thought it was good nonetheless. In the sentence you pointed out, Snape is speaking generally. Most wizarding children in the UK go to Hogwarts. Nine year old Snape isn't going to make the distinction and start naming every wizarding school in the world. Though I may alter the sentence. Thank you for pointing it out.

Name: mppfangirl1960 (Signed) · Date: 05/14/12 19:05 · For: Chapter 1
That was really good!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Name: HumanHorcrux (Signed) · Date: 05/07/12 23:28 · For: Chapter 1
This is really neat! :D I like how you started with Lily and Petunia as children, and ended it with that- so much has changed... :P

Author's Response: Thank you so much :) I'm glad you liked it, I had a lot of fun trying to write child Lily. Thanks for taking the time to review.

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