Reviews For More Than a Game
Reviewer: EdwardWeasley
Date: 05/31/12 21:20
Chapter: One-Shot

I loved the story, and I think it captures the essence of James and Lily as a couple, they're so different and at the same time so much alike. It's always good to read a good fan fiction, and this was one

Author's Response: Aw, shucks. Thank you for such a nice review! I'm glad that you liked it. I'm afraid that it's not my best but I'm glad that it made the cut. Thank you for reviewing! ~MJ

Reviewer: Skarlett
Date: 05/21/12 11:52
Chapter: One-Shot

I thought it was a nice story... simple, but sweet.

However, I can't help but wonder about Lily's reaction. It doesn't seem likely that she would just immediately decide that she liked him too and wanted to spend her future with him. I imagine she would probably try to deny it at first, being the stubborn girl that I imagine her as.

Of course, that's just my opinion. One of the most wonderful things about James and Lily is that you can write them almost any way you want to. We know almost nothing of their past at Hogwarts from the books, so we must leave that to our imaginations to figure out. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I do agree with you to a point. I sometimes like to imagine that Lily secretly did like James and that she wouldn't admit to anyone but herself. I think that was one of those moments when Lily's imagination ran wild about the future. I guess we'll never really know what happened. But it's fun to try and make up the story. Thank you for the review! ~MJ

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 22:00
Chapter: One-Shot

Aww such a sweet one shot! :-)

Author's Response: Oh, thanks! I'm glad that you liked it! I enjoyed writing it. Thank you for the review!!! ~MJ

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