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Reviews For To the Hollow

Name: theaubinator (Signed) · Date: 08/19/13 6:31 · For: Between the Best of Friends
I thought this was well done :) I think you did well on the characterization especially. The story flowed very nicely. I liked Severus' and Lily's friendship. And I liked how you set up Petunia's jealousy with their parents trying to even it out but not. I can't wait for more! I look forward to what you write in the future!

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