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Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 08/19/12 13:52
Chapter: You Could Have Been Great

I thought this was completely accurate to how Voldemort. All his thoughts on love and hate were so true to his character and it seemed so effortless. I got the chills when he murdered James and Lily. This has made me hate Voldemort even more. You are an amazing writer!

Reviewer: Salazar92
Date: 04/21/12 0:24
Chapter: You Could Have Been Great

Wow, Alice - that was really powerful! I know we know the outcome of that night, but not from Voldemort's point of view and it was a good interpretation of what he might have thought at the time. I particularly liked the last part with him and Harry; 'you could have been great' was rather ironic!

I did think, at times, Voldemort's observations were a bit too keen (decoration of their house, neighbours flowers etc.) and perhaps Voldemort's insight into lily's feeling was a touch too astute, but maybe that's just me.

Overall, I think this is very well done - good job :D

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