Is Maryam a girl or boy? Is Gwenog a girl or boy? Is Georgette a girl or boy??
Whatever. I still think your works are amazing. :)
Author's Response: Gwenog Jones is the world's best and famous female quidditch star. According to JK Rowling. she is the Captain of the Holyhead Harpies
, former member of the Slug Club, and unmarried. The rest of the characters or character traits are my creation for my little HP universe and are not considered canon outside of there: Gwenog Jones was in late thirties and unmarried; I write as a lesbian torn between her love of the game that consumes her life and any 'real' relationship. She has not been open to the general public about her life because Gwenog Jones (Celebrity/commercial spokeswoman) makes much more money than Gwenog Jones aging Quidditch player. Georgette Tawlib was a much younger player for the Harpies. Many in the league thought Georgie had slept her way onto the Harpies. She had not, because they both, she and Gwen, knew Gwen loved the game more than she ever loved Georgette. Maryam is a common Egyptian female name (a kin to Miriam or Mary). Maryam is a closeted Lesbian in a county where the government doesn't approve of such. An older and more at peace with herself version of this Gwenog Jones appears in my Scorpius Malfoy stories.
A quidditch match lasting more than three chapters. Spectacular.
This was good- it seems to be building up to a good plot. :) Just one thing, though, I thought Ginny played Chaser, not Seeker. Or have I missed something in the chapter? Either way, keep up the good work! :D