Reviewer: lucca4
Date: 04/26/12 23:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

Dear expectopatronuts,

I think I am in love with you. This may seem quite sudden, but in fact it is not. I think we have a mind connection, because how else could I have known to add you to my favorites without reading any of your brilliant, eye-popping jaw-dropping fics before?

And how else could you have known that I love stories that keep me guessing? I had no idea who it was that Scorpius was in love with. For some reason Hugo popped into my mind and I wondered why you gave him blonde hair. At one point I even thought it was Narcissa, until I remembered that the narrator was Scorpius and MNFF does not allow incest fics.

Anyways, back to the reasons why you and I have a mind connection: you knew that I was permanently, absolutely, completely, irrevocably in love with Teddy Lupin, and now he and I can get together without Victoire interrupting! It was getting a little awkward. But don't worry - I still have room in my heart for you :).

Thank you (in all seriousness) for this story. The way you write is just fantastic and you say so much in so few words. The descriptions were WOW, the lyricism was OMG!FAB, and I loved it. Never mind the fact that it's amazing in itself just because it ships Scorpius with someone who probably hasn't had a taste of him yet ;).

Much love,

lucca4 - but please, dear, call me Ariana.

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 04/12/12 12:59
Chapter: Chapter 1

Why did I think this was going to be Scugo when I saw it on the list? No idea, but I did! And once again you have surprised me, expectopatronuts. I thought you did a nice job building up to the end, and leaving the name until the final paragraph was a really neat way to reveal just who this other person was. And you've written a rather fascinating rarepair as well. I could see it, I think. I feel bad for the person we always assume the reveal ends up with in canon, though. Who's the American exchange student then?
Nice read! Keep writing! ;)
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Ah! Yet another person wants me to keep writing. Should I? ;D If you want to read Scugo, you should read hestiajones' fics. She has two of them. Oh! Equinox Chick has one too. I am happy you liked the fic. I am excited and motivated by the responses so far, even though I wasn't hoping for anything. The American exchange student is the lovely lucca4.

~Nuts

Reviewer: hestiajones
Date: 04/12/12 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hello expecto!

Ah, well-tried first attempt, if a little too short! Honestly, this could have been expanded. I understand you don't mean to continue writing, but I think you should. :)

~Call me "Natalie"

Author's Response: Hello, "Natalie"!

;D

Well, I wasn't trying to write anything earth-shattering. It was hard enough trying to stretch it to 1000 words so I could submit it! I don't think writing is my thing, but hmmm! If you say so, I'll maybe give it a shot. Hehe. Thanks for reviewing.

~ Call me "Nuts"

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 04/12/12 10:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

OH! - was not expecting that. I thought, O newbie author, that this was going to be an SSP and featuring Scorpius who I love to death *sigh* Anyway ... I'm not going to say much more except that this was good to read, well written and I was so not expecting that end - hahahahha.

You have a promising future ahead of you, just don;t troll things, nuts. ~Croll~

Author's Response: Oh hi, Equinox Chick!

I am not really a real writer, to be honest. ;D I don't think I will be writing more, because I prefer to read and review. I only pulled out this quickie for lucca4. BUT I GOTCHA, didn't I? I also ship Scorpius with ladies sometimes, but I didn't want to bring it up in my High reviews because that was Scorpius/Lily. And I ship Scorpius/Hermione!!

As for the last advice, received but not taken, I say! I shall continue trolling in the deep.

~ nuts

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