Oh, so sad! I loved the rhythm this poem had! Very beautiful job. :) Keep it up!
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That was lovely! It feels so free yet structured at the same time. I loved the contrasts, and the repetition of 'The rain keeps falling.' It really gave the poem a nice flow. Great job! ~Gina :)
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Wow, that was amazing. It was so tenderly written that I found myself sympathizing for her even though I had no clue who she was or who he was until the end. Great job!
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