Great Story! I can see Ginny being scared about telling Harry. The Ginny I picture in my mind is a tad different than the one here, not personality wise, but I just can't picture Ginny starting her final year at Hogwarts married and pregnant. I only say this because Ginny would be turning 17 right before she starts her final school year.
Thank You for the in site to this special part of Harry and Ginny's world.
-Cherise
Author's Response:Cherise, thanks for the review. I appreciate them a lot :)
SH..sorry, was about to curse. I got a nitpick and forgot to fix the whole problem (brb), so Ginny is eighteen and finished with Hogwarts. However I agree that it would be unlike her to do such a thing.
I'm glad you liked the story, however. It was my first attempt at Harry/Ginny, so I was a little unsure about it.
Lily xxx
I've read the other comment, and I agree. There was a slight mistake, but it may not be a mistake. Its your story, and you've adapted J.K Rowling's work into something new, so don't be down-put by the mistake.
Overall, it was a good fic. Young pregnancy happens a lot, and this is a prime example of that. Had a detailed plot, so, well done!
:D - Sean
Author's Response:Sean, thank you for the review :)
I have now fixed the nitpick, so there's no need to worry about that anymore.
Thank you for the compliments. I wanted to write a Harry/Ginny fic that wasn't utter fluff, and I also wanted to write a sequel to my story Laugh, so young pregnancy sprang to mind. I'm glad it had a detailed plot, because that's what I was going for.
And once again, I have written a response longer than the review, so I will stop now :D
Lily xxx
Nice fic, I love Harry/Ginny but you have a minor error with Ginny's age. She was born right before the deadline, on August 11 making here barely 11 when she went to hogwarts. But nice fic! -Nidhi-
Author's Response:Thank you for the review!
I appreciate the nitpick, as always...I researched the date, but not the year, and in retrospect that was a stupid mistake. I'll go to fix that right away.
This was my first time writing Harry/Ginny so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Lily xxx
