What a great sonnet! I don't know who I would choose.... But I enjoyed it still the same!
Author's Response: Thank you again for reading my poems! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review! ~Gina :)
Nice! I think so many Hogwarts couples would've been through this, and so no matter who people thought of, it wouldn't matter.
Good use of the sonnet. I'm jealous, as I've been trying to write one for ages...
Author's Response: Yes, it could fit a lot of couples, couldn't it? Thank you for reading and for the review! I quite enjoy writing sonnets, when the fancy strikes. Good luck with yours and thanks again for the lovely review! ~Gina :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! ~Gina :)
Beautiful, Gina. I don't know what else to say, except that's beautiful.
Author's Response: Thanks, Alex! I really appreciate you reading this! ~Gina :)
Happy birthday, Equinox Chick! And great poem.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ~Gina :)
I just read in Carole's review that you're not a PA member -- that stuns me a bit. This is absolutely beautiful. It flows so so so nicely, really. I don't have a lot of words for it, actually, because I'm just so filled up with the beauty of this poem. It's really fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Kara! I'm glad you liked it! As for PA *cough* I just don't think I could produce a poem on command once a month. I've done two in the last six months and I'm exhausted, lol. Thanks again! ~Gina :)
Wow, I had just uploaded a story and came SO close to naming it Discovery, before just having that be the name of the chapter instead.
But on the actual subject of your poem, just lovely. I think the first stanza is my favorite, the last line of it just seems so sweet and innocent. Beautiful as always :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it and really appreciate the review! ~Gina :)
Thank you ... this is perfect and lovely and so uplifting, which is just what I need. Ahhh, my Scorpius and Lily, so beautiful.
Gina, please join PA, your poetry is so good. This is so well-structured, but it's not just the form, you always put emotion into your poetry and that is such a great skill.
thank you so much for this. It's LOOOOVELY
Author's Response: Carole!! Yay! I'm glad you liked it! I was a bit worried you might find it sad, actually, so I'm glad you found it lovely and uplifting instead. But like I said, it's not necessarily Scorpius and Lily, muhahaha! Maybe I should write a fic to go with it. Not my original plan, but intriguing none-the-less for the to-be-written list. Hmm. :) Happy birthday, I'm so happy you liked it!! ~Gina :)