Reviews For Modern Day Centaur
Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 10/21/13 12:05
Chapter: Prologue

This is an intriguing start, and you have certainly captured my attention with the mysterious book Mallory has found. I was wondering about the handsome man, and the hoof, and then remembered the title, so I'm thinking he must be a Centaur, which is certainly an original love interest.

The use of the name 'Ginny' has obviously made me think of Ginny Weasley/Potter, although I'm thinking this must be a conincidence as you've described her as having green eyes, and Ginny in the books had brown. Perhaps she's a relation, somehow.

As a prologue this certainly captures the attention, although I wish it had been a bit longer, and also that you'd added to the story because I can see it's been over a year since you updated.

Good start. Well done. ~Carole~

Reviewer: FieryGem
Date: 05/07/12 23:03
Chapter: Prologue

I like this so far, looking forward to the next chapter!

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