Reviews For Save Me
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/19/12 4:59
Chapter: Save Me

Is this about the famous trio?
I found this very exquisite! What a poem! Your first time? It doesn't seem like it!

Author's Response: Yes it is. Specifically about how I think Ron and Hermione are Harry's greatest strength. You flatter me, but this is really my first poem! Thank you for your review :)

Reviewer: Gwen Evens
Date: 05/20/12 14:26
Chapter: Save Me

Sorry for net speak but, OMG that was amazing and this is your first ever poem holy Merlin's beard you are amazing. I have nothing bad to say only OMG that was a work of art!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the great review! Really made my day! :) and I don't mind the net speak

Reviewer: Envy_I_May_Be
Date: 04/25/12 11:59
Chapter: Save Me

This is beautiful. I loke the chopy style of it; I think it really captures the true essence of Harry's emotion. I also like the word choices; such as when you said they were helping him move his aching legs; it was very good :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the nice review :). I didn't mean for it too be choppy but I guess it worked out. I only hope to expand on this and get better.

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 03/13/12 6:22
Chapter: Save Me

Maybe you should use more smilies. Comparisons using; like or as. But that's me. I myself use many metaphors and onomatopoeias, writing sounds, crash bang boom pow.

Author's Response: I'll will definitely try using more of those in the future and make anything I write in the future better. Thank you for the helpful comments and the review! :)

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