Reviews For If Only You Knew
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 05/27/12 5:21
Chapter: Prologue

I believe I've read this before, but I didn't leave a review, so here it is: Augh!!!!!! A short chapter that has left me hanging! Poor Eileen... Seriously, why did she marry Tobias? Plus, and this is nothing against you, I've always wondered why the name was Tobias Snape... It doesn't sound very Mugglish to me. Eileen Prince actually sounds more like a Muggle name. Isn't that weird?
At any rate, please continue this story! I want to see where it goes!

Author's Response: EEP! I had actually forgotten how I planned to continue this story, but your Tobias comment has set off a chain of thoughts. -ponders-

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 03/04/12 1:47
Chapter: Prologue

Eileen Prince has always struck me as a tragic figure although I've never read much about her in fanfiction so I'm interested to see where you take this. It's pretty new territory for me.

This was a beautifully sad start, Lafonna. Well done :)

Author's Response: I have never given her a thought. D: I hope I'll be able to write her well. Thanks for the review! <333

Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 03/02/12 7:38
Chapter: Prologue

OOooooh, Natalie, I'd like to see where this goes! I think you've set up the scene really well here, and you've established Eileen's character excellently.

And, awww, the boy she used to babysit sounds so sweet. And cute. :D I can't say much more because there isn't a lot to comment on, but, as I said, I'd like to see where this goes. I hope you can update soooooooon :)

Author's Response: :D I can't wait to write more, honestly! Thank you for reviewing. :) It's a huge motivation.

Reviewer: Karaley Dargen
Date: 03/01/12 18:46
Chapter: Prologue

Oh.

This sounds tragically beautiful, with her memories.

And the.... mysterious child *sniggers* sounds a lot like i'd imagine him at a younger age! So mystified by the simple things.

Poor Eileen. Poor girl.

Author's Response: All I have to say is, thank you for the pairing lol. :D I'm going to enjoy writing the rest.

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