Very well written.
I'm kind of hoping you've written a follow-up...
I didn't really like the shipping but you did a good job expanding it. :) well done .
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! :)
Wow. That was really interesting. Good interesting, not bad. I really enjoyed reading it! In the books, you didn't ever see Narcissa and Arthur talk at all, and I thought it was great to read a backstory sort of story. It was really excellent!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story, thanks! :)
This. Was. AWESOME! I loved it! :D :D XD
Author's Response: Yay, thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
I never would've thought to pair these two together, but love can be unpredictable. You made it so realistic. I felt terrible for Narcissa :( Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad it felt real, and yeah, poor Narcissa.
Hello! :) Now that the GH Cotillion is over, I had to stop writing and read this. :D This is a sweet fic, and the pairing is so out of the blue lol. I do wonder why you didn't include Molly at all.I always had the impression that she and Arthur had been together from school and married quickly lol. YAY for intriguing pairings, and good luck for the challenge!
Author's Response: I mentioned her in the first part - he broke up with her temporarily in my head-canon. Thank you so much for the review! I sincerely *hope* it does well with the challenge. :D