Reviewer: kkeenergirl
Date: 04/17/12 17:39
Chapter: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: caligirl84
Date: 04/14/12 8:07
Chapter: Chapter 11

aw stupid weasley for ruining there relationship before! ah lol! and of course he goes back with wendi! pft! i love the new found respect draco has for hermione here. he seems to be truly in love with her. aw! so cute, you should update soon!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/13/12 23:18
Chapter: Chapter 11

After the crazy day I had (it is Friday the 13th after all), I was so excited to see an update for this fic! I enjoy Dramione fics because I feel they are very good for eachother and you reflect that well in your writing. Draco finally got Hermione to take a vacation from work and Hermione is helping Draco open up emotionally...it's so sweet! I am interested to see how Draco's test goes...update soon!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/13/12 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 11

I can't wait to see how Draco does on his competition. I think it's best that he spends the night alone. I know it's good for them to take it slow but I hope they get back to being hot and heavy again. Great chapter.

Reviewer: JCJ58
Date: 04/07/12 17:42
Chapter: Chapter 10

I love this story. Its very well written, and the character are clearly defined.

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/07/12 0:45
Chapter: Chapter 10

Lovely chapter...very bittersweet. It has it's happy moments with Hermione almost slipping about her feelings and Draco being reunited with Scorpius but then it has its sad moments like Draco kicking Hermione out of the hospital room and them both missing eachother so much. I am completely hooked...can't wait for more!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/06/12 19:41
Chapter: Chapter 10

Very nice chapter...quite a swing of emotions and reactions. Glad to have another point of tension between Hermione and Draco that will eventually strengthen the relationship. As for Ron not being punished as of yet...perhaps there should be some kind of censor put on him at work? A desk job for x-amount of weeks, plus anger management training and a block on his access to Hermione's floo. No amount of fame should prevent him feeling some consequences for his actions.

I enjoyed the confrontation between Astoria and Draco. Eventually he will realize the positives associated with Hermione's presence in his life...but not yet. They have a long way to go.

Looking forward to another chapter!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/06/12 15:41
Chapter: Chapter 10

I was so happy to see you had posted a new chapter. I wanted Ron to be arrested but I didn't want him to go to Azkaban forever. I guess there wasn't another choice though, like going to regular jail for a month. I think that Draco letting Ron attack him like that showed how much he loves Hermione. And, bless Hermione for contacting Astoria and the elder Malfoys and for doing that when everybody knew it was her ex who attacked Draco. Despite the fact that Draco sent Hermione away, I'm confident they'll get back together. Great chapter.

Reviewer: looney lover
Date: 04/01/12 21:44
Chapter: Chapter 9

Amazing story! I really loved it.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 03/31/12 22:01
Chapter: Chapter 9

Excellent! I knew the floo would eventually spit out Ron at an unwelcomed time! I like how you kept Draco's responses controlled, from the first arm motion on the sofa until the end of the duel. Didn't see the Incidaere Curse coming...very effective. At first I thought Ron might hit Hermione with a curse as she ran into the room, resulting in Draco's protective side rising to the fore. Still, I like how you turned the plotline and look forward to a bit more confrontation between Ron and Hermione...a clearing of the air, so to speak that leaves Ron without doubt that the marriage is over. Oh yes...I hope you use Draco's time-restrictive visits with Scorpius to motivate Hermione to set up a more secure visitation system that benefits everyone in the family. Good job. I am anxious for the next chapter.

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/31/12 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 9

OMG!!! Here I was all excited that Draco and Hermione were having a romantic Christmas Eve and BAM! in comes trouble...poor Draco. I hope he is okay and I hope this brings Hermione and Draco closer versus tear them apart. Harry and Ginny's reaction to help Draco and Hermione and show anger towards Ron really shows who the wrong party is in all of this. Great job, keep it up!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/31/12 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 9

This chapter was totally priceless. It was great having Ron walk in right after Draco and Hermione had sex. It would've been even better if he'd flooed in when they were doing it. This chapter was so good that I almost choked on my breakfast bagel--even now I feel like I've swallowed too big of pieces:D I was excited and eating too fast. I really think Harry should arrest Ron. He hit an unarmed wizard with a Dark Curse. I loved your descriptions of Draco dueling. It was like he was calmly standing there swatting at an annoying fly. Excellent chapter. Seriously, Ron should be arrested.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/31/12 15:59
Chapter: Chapter 8

I don't know what it is. You're not real descriptive with the racy parts but at the same time I can imagine what's going on. I've always been scared of writing sex scenes. I'm afraid of what people will think, whether good or bad. I wish I could come out of that shell. I was busy last week so I let a couple of your chapters slip by. Now I have a couple to read on this nice weekend. Great chapter.

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 03/28/12 10:44
Chapter: Chapter 8

Ah. it was terrible when this chapter ended. You're doing such a great job! Can't wait to keep reading

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/26/12 4:17
Chapter: Chapter 8

LOVE this chapter! I wonder what made Draco surprise Hermione by Floo...nice touch! I enjoyed seeing Draco start to open up more about his situation with Scorpius. I hope that Hermione gets to be more open about her relationship with Draco and I am happy to see that they will be spending Christmas Eve together. I look forward to the weekly updates : )

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 03/25/12 22:27
Chapter: Chapter 8

Very nice; richly interwoven with emotion. I appreciate your subtle,but heady description in the opening paragraphs. (I was a tad nervous one of the other "unrestricteds" would floo in at a most inopportune moment!) Thank you for abbreviating the inevitable Ron/Hermione post-divorce talk; I thought Hermione's summary to Draco was effective on the heels of Astoria's curt/dictatorial visit and Draco's unexpected outburst...which I also thought shed a stunning light on the Malfoy situation. (Hadn't considered the wizarding world being concerned about Draco raising Scorpius in the same manner Lucius raised him! ) Glad to know you will be posting weekly...I am enjoying the story. I hope you have maintained the tension that sets up Draco and Hermione's discussions and revelations of self. Good job

Reviewer: HeRmiONe923
Date: 03/20/12 7:13
Chapter: Chapter 7

I'm really loving this story, and I'm glad it's being updated so quickly!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/20/12 2:50
Chapter: Chapter 7

Can't say this is the most eventful chapter since Hermione and Draco didn't even see eachother, but it was interesting to see more of the other characters. It looks like Ron is regetting the divorce but I hope Hermione doesn't cave and take him back. I also hope that Draco and Hermione get to see eachother over the holidays. I will be interested to see how they all break the news to the kids. Can't wait for more : )

Reviewer: caligirl84
Date: 03/19/12 19:26
Chapter: Chapter 7

in my mind i've always seen ron as a hypocrite too lol! i agree with fynnsmom. ew i can't believe he wouldn't agree if hermione was dating someone & ron was. ah men. haha! good chapter, can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 03/19/12 18:56
Chapter: Chapter 7

I knew it, I knew it. Ron's a big fat hypocrite. I hate to see someone suffer but I can't wait for Ron to find out what's going on with Hermione. It will be fun to find out how different people react when they find out about Draco and Hermione. Great chapter. Can't wait for more.

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