Reviews For Restless
Reviewer: Theloonyhermione
Date: 07/01/12 20:18
Chapter: Restless

I have always been a huge Hermione fan and this was great!! Good job capturing all of the emotions. The perspective did confuse me a bit, but still very good.

Author's Response: Thank you! I tried to play around a bit and do it in third person instead of first, but it didn't turn out as great as I wanted it to.

Reviewer: BeauxbatonsWitch
Date: 02/26/12 23:34
Chapter: Restless

I don't usually read trio stories but read this because it looked interesting. You write very well especially Hermione's emotions. I loved it when she was dancing by herself and then with Harry. It was a beautiful moment. well done.

Author's Response: Thank you! I seem to have a knack for making people read things that they normally wouldn't. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Reviewer: karin
Date: 02/21/12 3:32
Chapter: Restless

Very Well written! Believable. So Hermione.

Author's Response: Thank you! That is such a huge compliment. It means a lot that you think it was really believable. That's the goal for my writing; I want people to really feel the character. Thanks again; reviews are always appreciated :)

Reviewer: SGozzy
Date: 02/20/12 21:35
Chapter: Restless

I really thought this was good. It was entertaining and a good read. I was wondering when you were going to continue "Crimson Clover" because I was really enjoying that one aswell!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it. As for Crimson and Clover, I'm working out a few kinks, but I promise that chapter three will be up soon! Sorry about the wait- too many unexpected problems. But fear not- there shall be more Vivian in the near future :)

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