Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/17/13 5:51
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

You just made me fall in love with Neville ;) Words are powerful and you know exactly how to place them for the most powerful effect.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Surely everyone loves Neville, He's a true hero.
-N-

Reviewer: stanzie
Date: 08/15/12 17:07
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

Neville and Hannah are two very independent people who must have an incredible strong relationship to withstand such lengths of time apart. Good on them.

Another good story. I loved the intro with Luna.

Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm pretty sure that they make up for it when they get together. :-D
I wanted to keep Luna in this story, because, to my surprise, she and Neville do, in fact, have quite a lot in common.
-N-

Reviewer: turquoiseturkeyz
Date: 07/18/12 3:14
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

I am a little sad to say I can not judge this very well. It was a lovely little mix of confusion and failed communication I loved it but my ability to scrutinize the characters parts in this story ends there. *Sigh* Ah, well! Love for the story should satisfy you, yes?
~Ellorah

Author's Response: Ellorah
It always does, thanks :-)
-N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/15/12 12:48
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

Great story

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 03/02/12 2:44
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

It is always nice when you venture away from the main two couples: better yet when you write about my favorite Puff and Neville (who could arguable be most folks favorite Gryffindor).

This was a really nice piece, and a great companion to MISTLETOE KISSES. Can't wait for more of your insights into the Neville/Hannah relationship, wedding and kids.

Hoping to catch up with the rest of your posts over the weekend.

Edyeb

Author's Response:
Thanks, Edyeb. :-D

Most folk's favourite Gryffindor? I hope you're right, I certainly agree with Luna's comment in this story: "I love him dearly, but most people do, don’t they?"

The next Hannah/Neville stuff will be in either Hunters and Prey (chapter 10) or Strangers at Drakeshaugh (chapter 15, probably). They'll be appearing in both, but which chapter will be ready first?

-N-

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 02/12/12 4:27
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

Awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks -N-

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 02/12/12 3:21
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

This was a nice read, Neil. Neville/Hannah has become a close second to Ron/Hermione for me of late, and I like what you've done here. My favorite line, and a concise summary of who Luna is: "The best thing about Luna was the same as the worst thing about Luna, it was her brutal honesty." Well said. Good luck in the challenge!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Lori. Neville/Hannah proved to be a lot of fun, especially with Luna in the mix too. Hannah is no fool. You've done an Ernie/OC peice I believe, I must check it out. good luck to you, too.
Neil

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 02/12/12 2:00
Chapter: The Professor and his Landlady

Awww...Hannah and Neville! This was great! Hannah and Neville are a couple no one cares to write much about. I'm glad you do, because they are great together. :)

I do have one critique, however. There is a line "Also, alphabetically, N comes before V,’ " said by Luna. I was confused on what the V stood for, if 'N' is implied for Neville.

Looking forward to more!
- Katie

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. As a completely canon compliant guy, I had to write about Neville/Hannah. I agree, they are great together.

As for your critique, Luna has confused you (don't worry, she does that to most people) Neville is used to her, and he knows that, alphabetically, LoNgbottom comes before LoVegood. :-D
-N-

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