Reviews For Baby Steps
Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/19/13 15:32
Chapter: fluffy oneshot

Wonderful fluff. A sweet story and well written. Though it doesn't sound like the Ron and Hermione I have in my head. But I enjoyed it anyway.

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 04/03/12 1:15
Chapter: fluffy oneshot

I love a good R/H fic! Especially if it has fluff! So I like this too!

Author's Response:

I'm glad you did!

Lily xxx

Reviewer: lovelle
Date: 02/05/12 9:50
Chapter: fluffy oneshot

so cute!

apparently that's all i can say.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Lily xxx

Reviewer: DaisyMaeEvans
Date: 01/29/12 14:52
Chapter: fluffy oneshot

Oh, how messy and awkward and beautiful, just like them. I'm blinking tears from my eyes. Great job!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Lily xxx

Reviewer: Free_Elf
Date: 01/27/12 4:45
Chapter: fluffy oneshot

I liked the fluffiness of this. It wasn't overwhelming fluffy, you got a lovely balance between sweetness and the awkwardness that comes with turning a friendship into a relationship.

It was fitting that they turned to discussing their pasts as a safe topic, since I think here they are a little afraid of the change a new relationship would bring to their futures. It is a new beginning though, no matter how stilted and awkward, and your end was a nice little mix of hopeful fluff.

Thanks for a sweet, enjoyable read

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review :)

Lily xxx

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