Morgan Lark is now officially my favorite OC. She seems to know how to put Albus in his place. Rose's chapter was my favorite ( it sounded almost lyrical). However, I really felt sympathetic toward Rose (and hate Effie's harshness).Mostly, I'm eagerly awaiting the fallout when Albus and Rose's friends find out about what they are really doing. I also think it would really funny to see their reactions when the cousins find out about each other.
Love it!! Read all three chapters today and I'm totally hooked! I usually hate it when chapters are told by different POVs but in your chapters events that occur to one character come back up with another which is great. I was a bit confused though on who Albus was just with while he was supposed to be on prefect duty. Effie or Morgana? Anyways great work! Can't wait to read more:)
Wow. Rose's chapter is my favourite yet, and I have to say I honestly didn't see that one coming!
I thought your characterisation of Rose was dead on, she's got the trademark Weasley fiery nature, but with her mother's brains and insecurities.
Can't wait for an update!
Wow Alice, I really like this! I follow your fic Albus Potter and the Midnight Thief, and I stumbled upon this - it's really good! It's nice seeing them when they're all grown up. We haven't seen too much of Morgana in your other Next Generation fic, but I hope we see more cause I really like her in this!! Update soon please :)