Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 9:28
Chapter: Chapter 10

AWESOME! Is it Al? After you finish this you gotta make the accidental grandparents. Ashley could become a mum when she's about 20 much to Snape and Celie's horror. Please?????? Pretty please??????????? YOU ARE AN AMAZING FANTASTIC CLEVER COOL GREAT FABULOUS SUPER SPENDID GOOD EXCELLENT AWESOME AUTHOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 9:10
Chapter: Chapter 9

Awwww... Again, I have recreated this picture. Please tell me how to send it to you. You're amazing. Fantastic chapter

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 8:56
Chapter: Chapter 8

Good thinking, including Lockhart and Sir Codogan! They crack me up too! I LOVE cadogans comeback! Cool chapter

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 8:39
Chapter: Chapter 7

I just noticed but you said Al was a year older than the girls. Now you're saying he's a prefect. He should be a second year, not a fifth year. Also, Al and Rose start at Hogwarts in 2017. But the year in this is 2014. So it's a bit out of order but oh well. It's still an awesome chapter and story. :)

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 8:30
Chapter: Chapter 6

I can so understand Ashley's annoyance. I'm a real injury attraction so I've accidently broken my arm twice and have had my finger broken by a volleyball. I had a cast for four weeks with my arms, then a backslab for two days with my finger, then a plastic spint for 6 weeks. That meant missing out on surf school AND I had my left hand rather useless at CHRISTMAS. When it's BOILING hot! So it got all sweaty and I had to be super careful when swimming. :-( overall great chapter and poor Ashley.

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 8:17
Chapter: Chapter 5

Cute................. Adorable.................... Aww...........

I think I'm gonna cry for the second time today! (Had things thrown at me, voldemorts magic wand got me in the eye!) great chapter

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 7:57
Chapter: Chapter 4

So cute... I've drawn what I think violets picture is, is there any way I could send it to you? Fabulous chapter!

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 7:47
Chapter: Chapter 3

Seeing Draco’s wet locks, Ron sniped, β€œYou look like a drowned ferret, Malfoy.” I. Love. This. Line. It's awesome. Keep up stuff like this!!!!!

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 7:27
Chapter: Chapter 2

So funny! Couldn't stop laughing!!! Strangely enough, I did that to my brother when he was asleep. I put his short hair in tiny pigtails and hair clips and bobby pins plastered his head! Great chapter. Keep up the good work

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/25/13 7:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great! I love it. They're so cute!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: HermioneJean1
Date: 04/24/13 9:12
Chapter: Chapter 1

They're so cute! Are they inspired by your younger siblings or something. I 💜 this chapter

Reviewer: oddsocks
Date: 03/22/13 14:35
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have just finished reading your whole Accidental series and I must say that it is superb!
Your writing is sophisticated and mature, and you have done Snape very realistically.
Are you going to finish this??

Reviewer: Fangirl-With-A-Quill
Date: 03/10/13 9:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

Love this story! But it's been over a year. Are you ever going to finish it? I really want to see what happens!

Reviewer: Bastet
Date: 11/19/12 11:04
Chapter: Chapter 10

Oh, I look forward to the last chapter!!

Beautifully written!
I adored Violet's evolution! Truly like a flower, blooming under the correct attentions.

I have to say I expected something like this (the eloping and Severus' attitude) but you did it so well! xD

Congratulations on your superb work. Loved it, as usual. : )

As for predictions, I see Albus Potter.... Eh eh, I think he's the only one who truly understood Violet throughout the stories, but especially first year. A silent companion is not necessarily a bad one.

Good luck with your new life and home! I wish you the best.

Reviewer: notquitegranger
Date: 06/26/12 20:25
Chapter: Chapter 10

Still loving it, can't wait till the next chapter!

Reviewer: notquitegranger
Date: 06/26/12 14:39
Chapter: Chapter 3

I noticed a possible error earlier in the chapter. Is it James or Albus who goes into the library? At the start it says Al but then theres the sentance 'James looked at him imploringly. β€œPlease? All Dad says is to be brave, you hafta listen to your heart.”'. Just thought I'd mention it. Otherwise, I'm loving these stories, I've read them nearly as much as I've read the original series! :)

Author's Response: You have such sharp eyes! I can't believe that I didn't catch that glaring mistake! It was Al who talked with Severus in the library and I've just changed the chapter to read "Al looked at him imploringly..." Thank you so much for mentioning it! I appreciate your help! :) Also, I'm super happy to hear that you are rereading the stories. Thanks for being such a loyal reader, reviewer, and mistake-spotter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: wamo412
Date: 06/24/12 17:35
Chapter: Chapter 10

that was great! I wasn't surprised with Ashley and Scorpius eloping, but, as always, Snape's reaction to it all was hilarious. I'm quite excited to see what you have in store for Violet! I also hope Snape and Celie will be grandparents before the series is done. Looking forward to the last installment! :)

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 06/21/12 19:16
Chapter: Chapter 10

Augh! I almost had a heart attack like Snape when I found out they eloped!
But I still loved it, and I loved how Ashley jibed at her sister for being in love with someone. Fingers are crossed that it is someone else to blow Snape's heart up!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/21/12 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 10

Awwww so cute. I am more like Violet of the twins for sure! I would never elope without telling my dad he is like Snape. He'd kill me! Haha

Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/21/12 18:34
Chapter: Chapter 8

Awesome! So glad Violet wanted to stay!

Author's Response: Leaving home is a tough thing to do, but I am also glad that Violet decided to give Hogwarts another chance. Thank you for letting me know your thoughts! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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