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Name: LadyLupin827 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 16:57 · For: Chapter Four: Dancing Against The Dark Arts
Oooooooh I think Remus would look SO good in a leotard!!!!!!!!!!! Anyway, you do a really good job of staying true to the characters while making the tale positively hysterical!!! 10/10 as usual! I added this fic to my favourites because I love it so much!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm glad the characters aren't drastically OOC, because they're funny anyway, ya know? Thanks again (yay - favourites list! Spelt the British way with a "u", I notice, same as me)


Name: LadyLupin827 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 16:48 · For: Chapter Three: The Postman Always Rings Twice
I adore the way Voldemort treats Lucius! awesome job!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, a lot of people seem to like that. WoHoo!!!


Name: LadyLupin827 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 16:43 · For: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan
Harry has no marshmallows??? NOOOOOO!!!!!!! Lupin is a dancer??? YYYYEEESSS!!!!!!!!!!! LOL!!! 10 again!

Author's Response: YAY, thank you!


Name: LadyLupin827 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 16:40 · For: Chapter One: Unfair!!!
Lord Voldemort a.k.a Tom Riddle a.k.a You-Know-Who a.k.a He Who Must Not Be Named sat upon his throne looking dejected. "I hate Harry Potter so much!!!" "Quite right, my lord," came the voice of Lucius Malfoy. "Oh shut up, Luci, I was having a private moment." LOLOLOLOLOLOL And then there was the part about the hot chocolate without marshmallows!!!!!!! And there was the bit about not revealing book six HAHAHAHAHA Who am I kidding, I can't pick a favourite part!!! 10!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And another helpless reader has been ensnared by my story - mwaahaaa!!!!!


Name: KRE (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 16:00 · For: Chapter One: Unfair!!!
Okay, just so you don't think I was serious when I told you about the world falling off its axis (he he) that is just an inside joke between me and my mom... I love chattering on about nothing to her b/c it annoys her half to death! Whenever I have nothing to say, we say the world is spinning off its axis! You were starting to scare me when you said Ireland was slidding, b/c America didn't start sliding until today! (;D) Just for your own info, I wrote this review to tell you that and b/c I need to keep adding to your reviews. It makes people think your story is actually good! (Just kiddding! Just kidding!!!!)

Author's Response: lol - ha a ha ha a hha. That didn't comfort me though, Ireland is still sliding....hmm. How's America doing? Are you moving towards Ireland or Japan?


Name: pottress_2010 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 12:57 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
all seven chapters are SUPER!! 10 out of 10. are you going to put Wormtail in the story?

Author's Response: Hmm...that's interesting. I was planning to put him in the last chapter for...various reasons. I'll see about earliar though...interesting.. thanks!


Name: bittersweet8186 (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 11:56 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
all in all a pretty funny fiction! even if i enjoyed the others chapters just a little bit more! ;) but it was stll very funny! i love dancing against the dark arts. LOL where do you take all these ideas? and ARGH... this fiction made me want to eat marshmellows! and voldy took all of them.. *cry* no really... good story! :D

Author's Response: I really don't know, I watch people, I take account of funny incidents that happen to me and/or my friends, and then I forget it all and write something completley different. Siriusly. Glad you like the story - keep reading! Hopefully the marshmallow crises will be sorted out soon...


Name: LilmissBrit (Signed) · Date: 03/02/05 6:32 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Funniest word is: Flargenblob. Is it a word? Is it a random sound I just made up? NO! It's the mating call of the flargenblob which lives on a far-away planet called Yaxhoiegh! Duh...you can't just make these things up, you know. In other news: it wasn't your funniest, but it still made me lol so that has to be pretty damned funny!

Author's Response: I went to Yaxhoiegh last year. Weird place. I like their gjlkd ice-cream though. Yay, I made you laugh! Nice to hear.


Name: Critic (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 21:00 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
What is the funniest word you can think of?

Author's Response: Emmm.......................hmm.........err..................ahh................noodle? It appears Zetera is not at her most creative.......


Name: caren_the_hpfan (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 20:17 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Well, it wasn't quite as funny as the other's, but it was hilarious all the same. The LOTR reference was really funny! Actually, I'm not supposed to be on the computer (don't shoot me please), but I slipped and started laughing! Gosh darn it, your story's going to get me busted! Keep writing, I really want an update!

Author's Response: And why would I shoot you? By all means, laugh away, and thanks for the review!


Name: ginnykicksbutt7 (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 19:21 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Not as funny, but close enough. Personally liked the first chapter best. I showed it to my friends...

Author's Response: And did they like it? lol. Thanks for the review, I swear I'll try to be better, maybe I should take some time off to deal with this writers block......


Name: Lily Blossom (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 19:07 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Wasn't as funny, but I'll deal with it. This is one of my fave fics! Update soon.

Author's Response: Aww, sorry. Hope you enjoyed it all the same. We'll see about the updates, glad this is one of your fave fics!


Name: KRE (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 18:00 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
I love making people smile! So much fun! This chapter was so good! I love the classes all having to do with marshmellows! It's just too perfect! Would you look at that! I have no off topic, random subject to base this review on! My creativity was spent during fifth period German... The world is spinning off it's axis now...

Author's Response: Oh, yay, thank you! Hmm...I see what you mean, I thought I was a bit of balance when I got out of bed this morning...and Ireland is sliding...sliding...


Name: kuro_tenshi_LL (Anonymous) · Date: 03/01/05 15:17 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
not as funny, but nevertheless good! when lupin started quoting lotr it made me smile ;-) oh, and marshmellows are always good. haven't eaten one for three years though... *sniff* imma still give u a 10 as i always had XD

Author's Response: Thanks - wow, three years! Voldemort is in shock...


Name: immortal_evil (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 12:57 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
It was really funny when Remus started quoting "Lord of the Rings." heehee. And when Voldemort's marvelous piece of literature was rejected. 10!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this. YAY!


Name: LilmissBrit (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 12:54 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
I don't know how their POV is so much of a drawback, as it is just different. A new angle. "The Spider's Side" It could start off as So this Harry Potter, he thinks he's big? Well, we have fangs and a thirst for human flesh! We sooo top him!" Doesn't have a lot to do with marshmellows though...*sob*

Author's Response: Hmmm....yes, but now Ron is refusing to work with me on the next chapter...


Name: LilmissBrit (Signed) · Date: 03/01/05 6:49 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Computer screens are annoying. All you need to do is conjure what you want to say into the air in the form of fireworks and leave your story glittering over the Forbidden Forest for all the spiders to see...hmmm...I see the drawback...

Author's Response: Ah...no..I see the drawback too...the spiders are coming..HELP!!!! They want their own chapter....AAARRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHH!!!!


Name: Janie Felton (Signed) · Date: 02/28/05 21:27 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
Very good, not as funny, but I loved it still!

Author's Response: Thank you, hopefully the next chapter will be much improved.


Name: Critic (Signed) · Date: 02/28/05 20:00 · For: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan
Yea! I am so glad that you weren't like the others who only replied with F You or crude things along those lines. In reality I liked your fic. You may be wondering why I wrote what I did. It is mostly because I was curious to how you would react. Very few writers grab my attention and I like to test thier people skills and their creativity by doing things like this. It really helps me determine what kind of person is writting the fic, which helps me appriciate it more. Sorry this is so long, but I felt that you deserved an explaination because of your wonderful response. Good Job :)

Author's Response: Wow, that's a dangerous way to get a writers attention! lol. Thank you for being kind enough to let me know your evil plan, and I'm glad my personality didn't let you down. I'm glad you actually like the fic, and I hope you continue to review! Hang on, don't go yet, I have to call off the wild dogs...


Name: Louisa Chocolatecake (Signed) · Date: 02/28/05 18:23 · For: Chapter Seven: School Days are the Best Days of Your Life, You Know ...
er..*choking. OK, sorry about this, I'm a little... loopy today...

Author's Response: It's alright - that's me everyday!!! Yipeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!


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