Reviewer: pottress_2010
Date: 03/31/05 18:24
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

OH NO!! IT'S ALMOST OVER!! *tear tear* 10/10 always good, & always awsome! luv your writing!

Author's Response: Thank you - more on the way - much more!

Reviewer: Miss Weasley
Date: 03/30/05 18:55
Chapter: Chapter Four: Dancing Against The Dark Arts

***"I thought Dumbledore wanted me to go cold turkey?" "Harry, stop asking awkward questions and lets go!"*** I gloved that bit! Keep up the work! I give you a 30! Oh, poo, it only goes up to 10. Too bad...

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - thanks!

Reviewer: Grainne
Date: 03/29/05 12:37
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Maith thu! The scene with Lupin, Snape, Ron, etc. was brilliant. Poor thick chaps! I will be sad to see this end, but am eagerly awaiting what I know will be a grand, grand finale.

Author's Response: Thank you - phew, I better start planning a grand finale then! lol

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 03/28/05 21:46
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!!! I think that's ur best chapter yet! well ALL OF THEM R SIRIUSLY AWESOME!!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR ALL THE QUESTIONS TO BE ANSWERED!!! (*sniff* the end is coming soon! *sniff* noooooooooooooooooooo!) TWO FAV PARTS:Potter, no-one actually transforms these days! All werewolves use costumes now, they have them tailor made once they're bitten. The Ministry has an office for it. Do you think we're living in the Stone Age?!" SECOND FAV PART!!! : "Kill him, my Lord!" "All in good time, Lucius, I must gloat first." TEEEEEEEEEEN!!! 10!!!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you animagirlphoenix! I love that you love it!

Reviewer: Auror316
Date: 03/28/05 13:00
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

You continue to out-do yourself. That was hilarious, I could hardly stop laughing when you put that part about harry still not being use to the wizarding world. You had me in stitches from the beginning to end! And it great how your not only making us laugh, but addressing real world issues at the same time. Ron had a very good point, how are you suppose to know when to know? He thought he knew, but he didn't...And then Voldemort waiting to kill Harry and them, hahaha! Evil villans always do that! They give them gloat, tell them their plan, allow them to think of a way to escape, give them various opportunities to escape, and then when they finally do, they get all angry at the good guys for it. They're the ones sitting back, drinking hot chocolate and pretending not to realize they're escaping! ...Sorry, had to get that off my chest, lol. Well, regardless, excellent chapter, 10!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - thank you! I'm so glad you think this stuff is actually getting better, I'm so proud.

Reviewer: chabe
Date: 03/28/05 12:39
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Well, this chapter was REALLY funny!! I love your story. It's a bad tthing of no-updating :(. See ya soon!! .::Chabe::.

Author's Response: I know, but I went home for the Easter break, and I don't have a computer, so no updates could be done. Sorry!

Reviewer: The Savant
Date: 03/27/05 18:54
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Now this is what I'm talking about! Very funny. And just when you needed a good send-off, too. Exceptional, let's hiope the final installment is longer.

Author's Response: Aww, thanks - glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Nadja
Date: 03/27/05 18:48
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

"Little baby Potter?" "Yes, well, it was the best I could come up with." "Actually, you took it from Bellatrix Lestrange. I thought it was awful then too. It doesn't even make sense." TeeHee. That was good. I also loved the part with Ron and Remus. And the werewolf suit. I'd like to picture that... I can't wait for the end. But I'm dreading it as well... So write faster and add more chapters or something.

Author's Response: More chapters? It's a possibility - thanks!

Reviewer: The Savant
Date: 03/27/05 18:47
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Secrets of Poetry and Prose

Sorry, I've been a bit out of the fiction loop for a while... So, about chapter 8. Elaboration on Voldemort's sudden urge to become a poet would be greatly appreciated on my part, as would a slight rescinding of the marshmallow thing. There is much potential in the Voldemort/writing storyline, but not much in the marshmallow one, or so I would say.

Author's Response: Hmm, I do intend to develop the Voldemort/writing storyline,and I'm glad you like it. You surely understand what I'm getting at with the marshmallows though, right? They're a plot device, rather than a plot line in themselves.

Reviewer: kuro_tenshi_LL
Date: 03/27/05 18:29
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

hmm... i was sure i submitted a review... but i'll repost it neway. i luv this quote: "Oh, Harry, isn't it obvious to you yet? We're near the end of the story, so it's nearly time for the battle between you and Voldemort." lol, cracked me up so bad XD *10* it's kinda sad this hilarious masterpiece is coming to an end... but all things must come to an end, ne? *10*

Author's Response: It's true, all things must end....but maybe not yet. Whoops, I've said too much...

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 03/27/05 17:40
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

No! It can't be over! But... I'll be pacified because the stuff about the "end of the story" is hilarious! -->"Oh, Harry, isn't it obvious to you yet? We're near the end of the story, so it's nearly time for the battle between you and Voldemort." Haha. I loved Ron's reaction - "I know, mate, it's know...we're kind of tired." I loved the werewolf costume too! This story has been a perfect mix of humor and seriousness. I hope you keep writing, or at least keep writing "Vampyr!"

Author's Response: Aww thank you. Don't worry about Vampyr, it's far from over. I'm glad your enjoying it! As for this fic....a few surprises may be in store...

Reviewer: BloodRose
Date: 03/27/05 15:46
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two I luuuurve you! This has got to be one of your best chapters, and that's saying somthing, taking in the allready excelent quality! 'To boldly go where no one has gone before...' XD!!!!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I wasn't sure about this one!

Reviewer: Monerz
Date: 03/27/05 11:49
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Hahahaha! This one had me laughing pretty hard. I loved that bit with Ron. "Well, how do you really know...." absolute brilliance. I think I'm going to print this story so I can have it forever. You never know when technology will be stupid and blow up and leave us back to the dark ages. Well, whatever the future has in store, I will always have "Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince!"

Author's Response: Aww - thanks. Actually, I'm printing it out too. I'm not too sure about this whole "faith in technology" thing either.

Reviewer: ShadowWalker1140
Date: 03/27/05 7:38
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Great chapter! I can't wait until you update your story!

Author's Response: Updates are just around the corner...

Reviewer: CaE
Date: 03/27/05 1:13
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Awesome chapter! It's the randomness I love, especially the wolf costume, couldn't stop laughing!! It's an 'Aw' that this is going to end soon.

Author's Response: Thank you, though I can't take full credit for the werewolf costume idea!

Reviewer: Tap
Date: 03/26/05 21:39
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Aw...c'mon! Cliffies ish ebil! Me luffeh the werewolf suit, I wash crackin up at that! I'm sad it's almost over, dun end it so soon!

Author's Response: I've had a change of heart about the ending actually...wait and see!

Reviewer: chabe
Date: 03/26/05 12:55
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Secrets of Poetry and Prose

Hey!!! YOur fic is really FUNNY!!! I likeit :D Specially the part of the marshmallows, it'so original. I hope you to continue it soon :) .::Chabe::.

Author's Response: Thanks - more on the way very soon...

Reviewer: MissLily0191
Date: 03/25/05 20:01
Chapter: Chapter Three: The Postman Always Rings Twice

COOKIES!!!! i used to love that omg im so stupid lmfao HAVE I MENTIONED HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!

Author's Response: You have - thank you. I'm delighted you're enjoying it so much!

Reviewer: MissLily0191
Date: 03/25/05 19:57
Chapter: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan

OMG LMFAO NO MORE MARSHMELLOWS!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! lmao my friend showed me an excerpt from this and i was laughing for a week before i was un-banned from my computer and came to read it! YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!! THIS IS HILARIOUS BEYOND REASON!!!! IF THERE WAS LIKE 100 FOR I RATING I'D GIVE YOU INFINITY!!!!

Author's Response: Ha ha ah - thank you so much! Out of curiosity, what was the excerpt?

Reviewer: Monerz
Date: 03/25/05 14:43
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

I read the chapter...again. And loved it...again.

Author's Response: Thanks Monerz - love ya!

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