Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 04/13/05 8:18
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Attention Okay everyone, for some bizarre reason, chapter 10 has been deleted. Hmm...I really don't know why. It'll take a while for me to get it up again too, as I have exams - see my bio. Sorry, this isn't all because I'm evil - some of it's just bad luck. Keep an eye on my website for news of updates. Love ya! ~ Zee

Reviewer: mugglemaddy12
Date: 04/11/05 20:50
Chapter: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan

im sorry to be reviewing again *hey! get that marshmellow away from me! HEY! dont shove it up my nose! OW!* but this chappie was hilarious (is that spelled right?).... the marshmellow thing is SO funny. marshmellows. marshmellows. *devises evil plan in head involving marshmellows and a unsuspecting pigeon*

Author's Response: You spelt it right, and don't apologise, I love reviews! Leave that pigeon alone!!! lol

Reviewer: mugglemaddy12
Date: 04/11/05 20:46
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

LMAO!! this is soooo funny! i love the whole "WHY CANT I BE IN THE TITLE?" thing! lolol! (in case u want 2 know, that stand for Lots O' Laughs Out Loud). lolol! lolol! i know u said u were having trouble responding to reviews, so u dont have to, but maybe u could R&R my story? *pleading look* its called The Expulsion. back to ur story: im supposed to be in bed (it's 10:00PM) but instead im gonna finish ur story. great job. 10/10! LOLOL!

Author's Response: Thank you, and I'll review your story as soon as I get the chance!

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 04/11/05 11:51
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Hey! I am school with nothing to do so i will review! YAY!!! ITS NOT THE END!!! (at leats I hope thats what the tally of the votes will say) PLEASE UP DATE SOON!!! AND DON'T FINISH THE STORY YET!!!! (i already placed my vote!) Cheers!

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm not finishing it yet, though there really isn't too much more to do...

Reviewer: Tinnevra McGonagall
Date: 04/10/05 21:27
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

I LOVE THIS STORY!!! It was SO good, I was reading this around midnight... (okay, I wasn't supposed to be up...) And I almost woke my mom up!!! I ADORE the marshmallow thing!!!! FANTASTIC!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, more on the way asap, but I'm very busy.

Reviewer: LadyLupin827
Date: 04/08/05 14:08
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

HAHALOLHAHALOLHAHALOL Remmy having a werewolf costume, Ron not understanding the expressions, and Voldemort not killing Harry because he has to "gloat first"!!! HAHALOLHAHALOLHAHALOL But what shall Voldie do when he discovers that there are no more marshmallaws??? MUWHAHAHA! 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Yay - thank you!

Reviewer: Zetera
Date: 04/08/05 10:33
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Hi everyone! ~ sorry about not being able to reply to reviews lately, but mugglenet won't let me! Chapter 10 has been submitted - and I have a feeling it won't be the last - I hope. For more info, go to the Harry Potter page on my website.

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 04/07/05 18:54
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Good God, a four?! Some people wouldn't know humor if it smacked them in the face...

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - thanks!

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 04/06/05 8:02
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

I still think that a four is really harsh...especially for this story. I know what kind of stories deserve a four, and htis one definately doesn't...*sigh* oh well. 10! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE LAST CHAPPIE!!! (although I'm dreading it at the same time....)

Author's Response: Aww, thank you, but each to their own etc...

Reviewer: Monerz
Date: 04/06/05 3:01
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Meh. People have the right to voice their opinions. And witchwannaB seemed to be civil about it. A four does seem harsh, in my opinion. Granted, I'm bais because this is my favourite humor fic. You can't please everyone, I guess. I don't have many friends that love HP as much as I do, but once I meet someone, I'll be recommending this fic to them. That's how awesome I think it is.

Author's Response: Thank you Monerz, you're right of course, everyone is entitled to their own opinion. I'm so glad that you like this fic so much though. BTW, I got your email - thank you for your concern. I was fine, I just went home for mt Easter break, and I don't have a computer at home.

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 04/05/05 17:53
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

*gapes and witchwannaB*..............A FOUR???? DON'T YOU RECOGNIZE A MASTER PIECE WHEN U SEE ONE??? U have INSULTED the author! How could this be rated a 4??? This entire story is worth 110% of tens!!!!!!!! *pouts* i hope u take the time to continue reading...for your own sake bcuz Zetera has faithful reviewers who praise and worhsip her *bows down in the "i am not worthy" fasion* 10!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you animagirlphoenix, but I really can't expect everyone to like it. Besides, witchwannabe voiced her opinion well, and she did commend my writing, so I'm not insulted.

Reviewer: witchwannaB
Date: 04/04/05 17:36
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Hmm, this wasn't nearly as funny as I thought it would be. Perhaps it will get better? But thankfully you have perfect grammar as far as I could tell, very good, very good. Rating this a 4.

Author's Response: Sorry about that. A four is a little harsh, but I understand if you didn't like it - maybe we just don't share the same sense of humor. I assume you're reviewing the first chapter, (the reviews come to me all mixed up, so I can't tell) hopefully you'll like it more as you read. Did someone recommend this to you? Maybe they built it up too much. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Loki MM
Date: 04/04/05 16:48
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Loki would like to take this time to apologize profusely for taking a VERY long time to review you? Apology accepted? Anyway, the chapter was great as usual --- Lupin's werewolf suit was very funny, and of course he part about Voldemort always waiting until the end of the book was fairly amusing. And the broomstick? Seriously. . . . Well, a few grammar errors, like one point where a word was possessive rather than plural like it was supposed to be, but nothing really big. All in all, awesome second to last chapter. Cheers!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - apology accepted. I must check up on those grammar errors - thanks. It may or may not be the second last chapter actually...I've had a change of heart over my Easter break...

Reviewer: Mei1105
Date: 04/04/05 9:01
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Ha! The werewolf costume! That was brilliant. Ur rite. Voldie does save his most evil plan for the end of the book. Eh well. It's predictability and we like it!

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! Poor Voldie - will he ever learn?

Reviewer: fvweasley
Date: 04/04/05 5:38
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

Ha ha ha! Excellent chapter! No wonder this story gets so many reviews, it's brillant!

Author's Response: Wow - thank you!

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 04/03/05 20:39
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

hey! where'd u go? U haven't answered any reviews lately...ur not dead r u? U CAN'T BE!!! DOn'T U KNOW HOW BAD THAT WOULD BE?? WE WOULD NEVER KNOW THE END OF THE STORYYYYY!!!!!! oh and we would also, erm...mis u...i gues..J/K! I WOULD BE TEARING AND BALLING MY HEART OUT!!! tehe PLEASE UP DATE SOON! Ps: I hope the last chappie will be LONG one! that will be my request...10!

Author's Response: No, no - I'm not dead. I went home for Easter and I don't have a computer, so I couldn't reply to reviews and stuff. But - I'm back! The last chapter will be as long as possible - just for you!

Reviewer: Louisa Chocolatecake
Date: 04/03/05 19:16
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

"Ah, yes, you thought you were so clever, didn't you, little baby Potter?" "Little baby Potter?" "Yes, well, it was the best I could come up with." "Actually, you took it from Bellatrix Lestrange. I thought it was awful then too. It doesn't even make sense." LOL that was one of my favorite parts - awww shucks, do you have to end it? Write another pretty please? Lol. Great job as always, *10*

Author's Response: Maybe I don't have to end it......thanks!

Reviewer: Secret_soul
Date: 04/01/05 17:07
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

awesome, as always! i dont know what im gonna do when u end this fic. please say ull write another one, ur so good itll be a waste if u dont

Author's Response: Hmm....I wonder what I would write about. I assume you mean a humor fic, because I have other fics going.

Reviewer: Lizzygirl
Date: 04/01/05 12:18
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

That was great! I loved the scene with Harry, Ron, Hermione, Voldemort and all the death eaters, that was stupendous! Definitely deserves a *10*!

Author's Response: Great - thank you! I was worried it would seem too rushed.

Reviewer: animagirlphoenix
Date: 03/31/05 20:24
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

OH MY GOSH!!! I just realized something...Wat am I going to do when this story is finished!!! *GASP!!!!!!!!* ::starts to panic:: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! ::runs screaming around the house and scares visitors:: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! ::gets panic attack adn is sent to the hospital and since the health servic sucks here in winnipeg I have to wait for about three years to get into the ER room:: AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! *breaks down in sobs* *sniff* oh btw HERE'S SOME MORE TENS!!!

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - you don't have to worry about it being over for a while, my dear. Yay - tens!

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