Reviewer: DracosHumbleHouseElf
Date: 06/12/05 15:46
Chapter: Chapter Three: The Postman Always Rings Twice

i love that cookie song, IT RULES!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Yeah, I just remembered it when I went to type this chapter. Glad you like it!

Reviewer: DracosHumbleHouseElf
Date: 06/12/05 15:43
Chapter: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan

omg this gets better and better, this is the first story i've ever laughed out load at...and when i did so my mum gave me an extremly wierd look :o 10/10 yet again

Author's Response: Ha ha - thanks!

Reviewer: DracosHumbleHouseElf
Date: 06/12/05 15:38
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!

Thats is the funniest thing i've ever read! I was cracking up, especially at "hello jo, this is voldie" i couldn't stop laughin! very talented my friend! 10/10 and no mistake!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you like it, and thank you for the compliment!

Reviewer: Crookshanx
Date: 06/11/05 11:51
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Yay! that's a pretty good way to start wrapping it up. speaking of wrapping stuff up, i still need to wrap my father's day present...darn!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it.

Reviewer: Scheherazade
Date: 06/11/05 2:51
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Excellent ending !!!!!!!!!!!!! :-D 10 !!!! (but if I could give it more, I would !!!) I loved it. I'm just disappointed that it's over. *cries* (Also, if it isn't too much trouble for you, could you read my one story, ITSOTS?)

Author's Response: It's not over yet, one more chapter to go, which should be up by next week. I'm so glad you liked it, and I'm off to read your story!

Reviewer: Splatteh
Date: 06/10/05 20:41
Chapter: Chapter One: Unfair!!!


Author's Response: Yay indeed, my friend.

Reviewer: Monerz
Date: 06/10/05 19:56
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Dun dun dunnn! Beautiful ending to a very hilarious story. Quite a moment, I say. I first made a user on this site just to comment on how much I loved this fan fiction. Seems like that was so long ago. And the bit explaining the OOC-ness? Went something like, "That's what happens when we get bored!" (horrible paraphrasing, I know) Anyways, that was brilliant and absolutely true! I cannot wait for the book to come out. ^^ I'll definitely be catching up with your other stories in a while. Damn work! Keeping me from reading!

Author's Response: It's not finished yet, but the final chapter should be up sometime next week (I hope). I'd forgotten that you first joined just to comment on this fic - thank you! ha ha - I'm glad you liked the ooc explanation. I really need to update my other stories...damn the work!!!

Reviewer: Transfiguration_Teacher
Date: 06/10/05 15:41
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Oh, my gosh, the master herself had to sort those nutters out... but then, they're right, that's what happens when you keep people waiting for too long ... and - notice this - it also holds true for fanfic writers and their fans!!

Author's Response: I know, that's why I put it in! lol - so glad you liked it, and I'm writing chapter 5 of 'It Begins This Way' next, just for you. ;-)

Reviewer: Jacquline
Date: 06/10/05 14:43
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

“Fine,” Voldemort said. “Can I kill Potter first?” “No, Tom, I need him for the next book.” ^bestest part^

Author's Response: Ha ha - I liked that bit too. Thanks!

Reviewer: Mei1105
Date: 06/10/05 12:44
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

I LOVE this story! I loved the way Jo was completely nonchalant. 'I'm the wise omnipotant author, I can fix everything!' (well she can I guess!) Anywho, great chapter.

Author's Response: Damn, I should have put that line in, that's great! Thank you, the final chapter should be up sometime next week.

Reviewer: dumblydoor
Date: 06/10/05 6:40
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

"why is everyone so ooc?" "you made us wait so long. we do get bored you know." that was hilarious! the entire thing was hilarious! i love this story! i was so excited when i saw youd updated! great excellent wonderfull job! 100/10!!

Author's Response: Thank you, that is one of my favourite bits if this chapter actually. Yay!

Reviewer: fvweasley
Date: 06/10/05 4:31
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Ha ha, my stomach hurts from laughing! Brillant stuff! Pity you had to put Voldy back, I LOVED how you were writing him, like a petulant child or something! Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm doing the final chapter now, and Voldy does feature at the end, so don't worry!

Reviewer: Kelsid
Date: 06/09/05 19:35
Chapter: Chapter Eleven: End of Daze

Very good!!! "Stop right there, punk!" “Oh, Remus, that’s not staying in character!” “But, I just always wanted to say that.” That part was absolutely hilarious! I can't wait until the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. The final chapter is being written!

Reviewer: AyamelovesPotter
Date: 06/09/05 12:38
Chapter: Chapter Two: An Evil Plan

Are you CRAZY? NO MASHMELLOWS!? HOW CAN PEOPLE SURVIVE WITHOUT MASHMELLOWS?! AIR- YES BUT MASHMELLOWS?! YOU'VE GOTTA BE OF YOUR ROCKER! But other than your marshmellow deficiency, it is so totaly crazy and hyper! Beware the 'A's. they'll try to keep Voldemort off of his pogo stick! so I guess there's no point to this and I'm probably freakin' some people out so... yeah.

Author's Response: Ha ha ha - you sound about as crazy as I am! Don't worry, I'm sure you're not freaking anybody out that's insane enough to be reading this story anyway. Voldemort on a pogo stick...interesting...

Reviewer: hpfannaticalltheway
Date: 06/09/05 5:05
Chapter: Chapter Ten: The Usual Suspect

Hey ive read your story over the past few days and just could not pud it down (so to speak, if u know what i mean! lol) ok so i think this is like really funny and i have forced all my friends to read it, which is a lot of ppl! anyways can't wait for the next update! *waits in bated breath*

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I hope your friends like it as much as you do. I'll update asap, please see my bio for update details.

Reviewer: caren_the_hpfan
Date: 06/08/05 22:43
Chapter: Chapter Ten: The Usual Suspect

Finally! I thought you weren't ever going to update, and had to content myself with re-reading previous chapters! Haha, another great one! "Stay in character, Remus." How I laughed at that. You keep the borderline between real and just hilariously funny so wonderfully! I am just waiting in anticipation for the next chapter, even if it might mean we're drawing closer to the end, because Voldemort always appears at the end. ;) Excellent writing, and keep writing. If you don't continue writing humor after this fic, I don't now what I'll do!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, that was a lovely review. I would like to write another humour fic after I take a little break from this one, otherwise I'll just be recycling old material. If you have any ideas, email me.

Reviewer: alexmac92
Date: 06/08/05 20:46
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

sooooo funny! keep up the awesome work! loved the marshmellow bits! two thumbs up!

Author's Response: Yay, thank you!

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 06/08/05 19:01
Chapter: Chapter Ten: The Usual Suspect

Excellent. I really liked it. Can you update soon? Pretty please?

Author's Response: I will do my best, please see my bio for my trouble with updating.

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 06/08/05 18:56
Chapter: Chapter Nine: An Evil Plan - Part Two

I LOVED IT! The Wereworlf outfit, the Last bag of marshmallows, the Evil firebolt! I loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad that you like this so much.

Reviewer: Hedwigs Queen
Date: 06/08/05 18:50
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Secrets of Poetry and Prose

I like it...I usually have nothing to say when I review GOOD stories. That means your story is very good.

Author's Response: Wow, my head is becoming swelled with all of this high praise! Thank you!

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