I love the story so far. please keep writing.
Luna and Neville are my two favorite characters if anything happens to them I'll be quite mad... Warning. Also Vincent Crabbe. You mentioned him and his son. But if you I remember correctly he died in the room of requirement during the battle of Hogwarts due to him using Fiend Fyre. Other than that I'm so lovin' this fanfic so far :)
Omigoodness this is an awesome fanfic so far!!!
No wonder he's dead no body was trying to heal him when the kids were going to the dormitories
I love this so much, I can't wait to find out what on earth is going on! I'm completely clueless! I think I may have already reviewed this, but I just wanted to say that I really love your characterisation, and for me the relationship between Rose and Scorpius is the driving force in this, new chapter soon please!!
Author's Response: hi! yes, you have reviewed already, but I really appreciate multiple feedbacks from readers so I know that I'm keeping up ;) I don't know right now how many of my chapters are on here - I submitted chapter 7 but I don't know if it's been accepted, I haven't checked. But I will tell you that the story is very far along right now in my computer, I've reached chapter nine I think it was? And it gets kind of freaking insane. Not gonna lie. Zabini comes in, but there's also a loooot of tension between scorpius and rose. =3 and maybe not the best kind? But no more spoilers <3 Thanks again!
Wow, this is awesome!! Please write more, you can't just leave me hanging!!! ;) Love the characters, by the way. I like how you made Neville head of Gryffindor house. Maybe you could throw in something to make Scorpius and Rose's relationship more interesting? No sex scenes, please! :P I really like them as a couple, but maybe they could break up for a couple chapters or something? You're amazing! Keep writing! :)
Author's Response: Oh, man, thank you so much. :D I have been writing as much as I can, I just get busy sometimes, haha. :D And with Scorpius and Rose... whooooooo boy, it's gonna get interesting I can promise you that. I've got a lot planned for the like, later chapters. I have no idea how long this thing is gonna get. Thanks for your review!!! <3
Wow this is great, I love the romance between Scorpius and Rose
Author's Response: thanks so much! haha I love it too! <3
Okay, Scorpius is now my favorite. He seems the most real of all of the characters, and reminds me a little bit of a few of my friends! ^_^
Author's Response: yeah? i love writing him, because I feel like he's got a lot of family issues with a dad like Draco, and I feel like he'd be kind of sultry a lot of the time. Thanks for reviewing!! <3
This is really good, and I already like Albus, Scorpius, and James--they seem the most real so far. I would, however, like to point out that if Lily is in third year then Albus should be a fifth year instead of a fourth year as he is two years older than her. Otherwise, great job!
Author's Response: see, i wasn't sure about that. I tried looking around for the age differences but couldn' find it, so I just went with what I have. :O But yeah. Thanks! :)
Wow this is really gr8 ! I'm writing a rose+scorpius fic but this is amazing
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
I love the mystery so far, and the romantic tension between Rose and Scorpius is really well handled, with a beautiful simplicity. I hope a new chapter will be up soon, I'm very intrigued!
Author's Response: Hey there! I actually just submitted a new chapter; it's not a whole lot, but the next is currently in the works. I'm really glad you like it! :)
heey i loved the story:) you did a great job with the characters, but i think you should think your words over a tad bit more because the occasional sentance can be a little hard to understand. Overall, i think it's a great read and i look forward to the next chapters! P.S. sorry i could not write a longer reveiw but i have been doing this all day:/ Keep it up!! :)
Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the response! (first one, no one likes meee). And after reading over the chapters, I have now come to agree with you and will strive to make suure it doesn't happen in any later chapters! Thanks so much again, and I don't mind the length :) Next chapter's been suubmitted, so I hope it's accepted soon! <3