Reviews For Lily's Legacy
Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 10/20/13 19:32
Chapter: Wedding

Grace is a very interesting character. I've never seen a fic with Harry's sister before, but this is a really good start! Good choice putting Dumbledore's death as the beginning. It really caught my attention and drew me into the story. Also, I like how you incorporated Grace's house into the story. It perfectly conveys most Slytherins' prejudices. I'm very interested to know why Grace was put in Slytherin. Also, why her parents hid her from knowing she was Harry's sister.

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/28/11 16:38
Chapter: Wedding

Grace is very nice. And the way you wrote Remus & Tonks' wedding was just how it should be :) I like that Grace has been involved with all our favorite characters, and you fit her into their lives really well!

Author's Response: Thank you! And I'm glad, I enjoyed writing it a lot. Tonks and Remus are such fun to write, and trying to incooperate their very different personalities into a wedding was challenging and fun. Unfortunately, this happiness isnt to last. Are you suprised? Thanks for the review, means a lot. Next chapter will be heading your way soon!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/26/11 17:00
Chapter: Wedding

I just added this to my favorites!! Love it!

Author's Response: Wow Thanks!

Reviewer: LoonyLupin
Date: 12/23/11 3:32
Chapter: Prologue

I used to pretend that I was Harry's long-lost sister when I was little! Heehee. It's nice to finally meet her :) Great job. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Hahaha, I did that too! Only when I was little, because I was sooo creative, I called myself Harriet, Harry's sister. Anyway, the next chapter is in the queue, so you shouldn't have to wait too long.

Reviewer: RedRose_Julie
Date: 12/22/11 16:53
Chapter: Prologue

This is really good!

Author's Response: Thanks! What in particular did you like most?

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