That was wonderful. I love how you have Severus saying, "Mine." I don't know why but there's something very sexy about that, and I'm a very independent person:D I'm glad you didn't have them jumping into bed immediately. That would be too fast. I can't decide if Ron should've thrown a tantrum or not. You let him down easy for some reason. I'm so excited this is s long story:D Excellent chapter.
I'll never grow tired of your SS/HG stories. The plot twists that you put in each of them makes them so unique. I'll miss checking for updates for this story. Do you have any more in the works?
Fabulous story :) thank you again Subversa!!
Fantastic ending! I enjoyed every moment of it! Thank you and I will look forward to more stories from you with this couple as the main characters.
I have to admit, when I first saw the Hermione/Snape pairing I was very interested. But your story caught my eye and I haven't been able to stops reading! The chapters are so well written and I loved all the subplots with the other characters. The ending was lovely! Kudos to you and it has definitely made me a SS/HG fan :)
YAY FINALLY those two belong together I am happy Severus was able to overcome his i.ner conflicts
I loved it you are a very talented writer keep up the good job
OMG--Hermione is going to be royally pissed now. I really enjoyee this chapter. In the freezing cold of winter I could imagine myself watching this romance develop on a warm summer's day. I must say, I got a bit warmed up thinking of Severus in his riding garb and imagining what Hermione was feeling. This duel piece is so hysterical. And, Luna's comments and actions at the end were equally funny. I can't wait to see what happens next. Excellent chapter.
This is a great story. I can't wait to see what happens next. Seriously, leave it to Hermione and Severus to be so stubborn. This story is so full of suspense i love it. Everytime a new chapter is updated i can't wait to read it but then get disappointed because i have to wait for the next to pop up. LOL I LOVE HERMIONE AND SNAPE STORIES...........
Author's Response: If you love Hermione and Snape stories, you should be reading at Ashwinder and/or The Petulant Poetess. :)
Darnit Harry lol I wanted to see what would happen when Snape and Hermione said goodnight!!! Excellent chapter, as always
This is a really fascinating story! Thanks for being so prompt with updates! I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for explaining those little things--like the language of fans. It makes more sense in the story if explained. I think Sybill and Xeno are adorable. I couldn't figure out who George wanted to play Puck but when you revealed his choice I could see that Draco would be perfect. I think Severus giving horseback riding lessons would be very sexy. I also think them talking through the wall is charming. It's hard to comment on all of my favorite parts in this chapter because I loved the entire chapter. I so happy that I have more chapters to read.
I dislike the slash, but otherwise nice to see his relationship developing. Thanks for updating!
Hmmm. very interesting ending! Thanks for putting up 2 chapters! I will now go back and review the first, but was too interested to stop between!
Soooooooo good!!!!! Subversa strikes again :)
As a big Jane Austen fan since middle school, and a big Snape fan, and a big fan of yours, may I say bravo. :)
CANNOT wait to see how Hermione reacts to being wagered.... Again.
Yes, I had meant to write that this is the first fanfic I have seen with a believable suitor for prof. trelawney!