Reviewer: GinnyPotter1824
Date: 05/03/13 20:32
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

More please.

Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/31/12 21:14
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

Love it!!!!!!!!! Please try to write :/ please!!! :)

Reviewer: PrivetDrive_123
Date: 12/28/11 11:12
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

It's really nice. I especially like the part when it said 'A chorus of nervous laughter came from the other Gryffindor's' Keep writing!

Author's Response: Will do! ;)

Reviewer: InvestedWithNargles
Date: 12/20/11 13:05
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

Really liked this! Could you pplllleeeaaasssseeee finish it?

Author's Response: I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Chapter Two is currently being written and will be posted ASAP.

Reviewer: cmbluey98
Date: 12/16/11 2:12
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

great!!!! bt how is this a sexual situation?

Author's Response: I am trying to be very cautious. Plus, I am still working on the story ;)

Reviewer: ASeriousHarryPotterLuver
Date: 12/14/11 2:37
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

very cute. is there more to come?

Author's Response: Indeed there is. Chapter Two will be up and running soon.

Reviewer: Livvy Lemon
Date: 12/09/11 4:06
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

I agree with the last reviewer, your story has a lot of promise but is not quite their yet. I would really like it if you would continue the story and i like the idea of telling the story from Ginny's prespective. One idea is that JK always talked about Harry and Ginny's times by the vegtable patch ect. and you could probably elbrate on that really well.
liv

Author's Response: I apologize for being vague, and I like your idea of continuing--thanks!

Reviewer: SaboteurVictory
Date: 12/08/11 1:36
Chapter: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses

Well written, but I felt like it was paced too fast. I read the story thinking there would be some climactic, cheesy, or in other words "plot" to the story that we didn't already know, and was a little disappointed. It's cute, for sure, but nothing we couldn't have thought up for ourselves. If you had drawn it out a little longer, used a bit more imagery and taken a deeper look into Ginny's mind, this would have been a much stronger story.

Keep it up, though!

Author's Response: Sorry, haha! I need to work on details, that's my main problem--I can give somthing bones, but I have problems filling in the flesh. Thank you!

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