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Name: GinnyPotter1824 (Signed) · Date: 05/03/13 20:32 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
More please.

Name: hermionepal98 (Signed) · Date: 05/31/12 21:14 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
Love it!!!!!!!!! Please try to write :/ please!!! :)

Name: PrivetDrive_123 (Signed) · Date: 12/28/11 11:12 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
It's really nice. I especially like the part when it said 'A chorus of nervous laughter came from the other Gryffindor's' Keep writing!

Author's Response: Will do! ;)

Name: InvestedWithNargles (Signed) · Date: 12/20/11 13:05 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
Really liked this! Could you pplllleeeaaasssseeee finish it?

Author's Response: I am so glad that you enjoyed it! Chapter Two is currently being written and will be posted ASAP.

Name: cmbluey98 (Signed) · Date: 12/16/11 2:12 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
great!!!! bt how is this a sexual situation?

Author's Response: I am trying to be very cautious. Plus, I am still working on the story ;)

Name: ASeriousHarryPotterLuver (Signed) · Date: 12/14/11 2:37 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
very cute. is there more to come?

Author's Response: Indeed there is. Chapter Two will be up and running soon.

Name: Livvy Lemon (Signed) · Date: 12/09/11 4:06 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
I agree with the last reviewer, your story has a lot of promise but is not quite their yet. I would really like it if you would continue the story and i like the idea of telling the story from Ginny's prespective. One idea is that JK always talked about Harry and Ginny's times by the vegtable patch ect. and you could probably elbrate on that really well.

Author's Response: I apologize for being vague, and I like your idea of continuing--thanks!

Name: SaboteurVictory (Signed) · Date: 12/08/11 1:36 · For: Prologue: Quidditch and Kisses
Well written, but I felt like it was paced too fast. I read the story thinking there would be some climactic, cheesy, or in other words "plot" to the story that we didn't already know, and was a little disappointed. It's cute, for sure, but nothing we couldn't have thought up for ourselves. If you had drawn it out a little longer, used a bit more imagery and taken a deeper look into Ginny's mind, this would have been a much stronger story.

Keep it up, though!

Author's Response: Sorry, haha! I need to work on details, that's my main problem--I can give somthing bones, but I have problems filling in the flesh. Thank you!

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