Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/14/13 15:01
Chapter: Gentleman Returned

Your story is brilliant. Keep writing. In my opinion the story could have had a better flow.

Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/14/13 14:53
Chapter: Gentleman in Hiding

I like your idea very very much!!! Harry giving advice and talking of his emotions openly really clashes with my idea of him. In the books bothered Ron and Harry seem unable to articulate anything emotional. I guess they would have matured a bit. I'm feeling conflicted, I love your story, but some of the dialogue don't ring true. (Then again I've been married to a Finn for 8 years and sadly the cliche is true, my husband couldn't do "girl talk" even if his life depended on it. So my personal experience of "men" affects my perspective hugely.)

Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/28/12 12:58
Chapter: Gentleman in Hiding

Again, I really enjoyed it!!!!!

Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/28/12 12:54
Chapter: That Perfect Gentleman

I like it a lot, and I hope the rest of it is this good :)

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 12/08/11 13:22
Chapter: That Perfect Gentleman

nice start..wondering where this will go.. update soon

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