Reviews For The Fourth Horcrux
Reviewer: hanname
Date: 02/04/13 5:57
Chapter: The Fourth Horcrux

Nice. A bit too short for my taste. Though on second read all the necessary bits are there. Keep writing :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 12/14/11 3:46
Chapter: The Fourth Horcrux

My only complaint was that it was too short! I enjoyed your plot and wished that we could see what Hermione was seeing. Great job, esp. for a 1st fic!

Author's Response: I really appreciate that. I actually am in the process of writing a chaptered story, and I hope to have the first one up over Christmas, though it's not about Ron and Hermione. But thank you

Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 12/11/11 3:40
Chapter: The Fourth Horcrux

I really liked it--short and to the point, but rich in detail and depth.

Author's Response: Thank you! I am very happy to hear that you liked it

Reviewer: Envy_I_May_Be
Date: 12/09/11 18:21
Chapter: The Fourth Horcrux

I thought this was really good. I loved it; it was short and simple, but it had a lot of depth and meaning in it. I really enjoyed it :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I chose this scene because it had strong emotions. It was out of my comfort zone, so I'm glad you liked it.

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