Reviews For The MacGuffin Hunt
Reviewer: Daenerys_bella_girl
Date: 10/22/13 20:55
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooh, I love the plot. I don't know why they're trying to open this box, but its hilarious! Good job on Pansy's character. She's just as bratty and self confident as I thought she would be. I also really like when Pansy pretends to be Ron. Is this all of the story? I feel like there's more that should happen. Maybe Pansy and Harry's relationship could develop? Anyway, just some ideas…

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/12/12 22:49
Chapter: Chapter 2

That was hilarious. The only thing I wondered about was weren't the two Pansy's wearing clothes under their robes? And, what happened to Hermione's clothes? I thought Pansy would be wearing them and Ron/Pansy would be wearing Pansy's clothes. No matter what clothes they were wearing, the story worked. I figured Harry would pick the wrong Pansy:D It's a good thing that Harry was reasonably kind or he could've ended up worse. This was fun to read and now I think I'm ready to start your 4th Alexandra Quick book.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 01/12/12 1:40
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was wonderful. It was so funny. I loved the mutant cow and I loved how you described Pansy's robes as showing a bit of ankle and cleavage:D I figured there was something up when Pansy said her fingers were broken. Harry can be so naive:D Excellent chapter.

Reviewer: lady_of_the_mannor
Date: 11/27/11 23:41
Chapter: Chapter 2

aw.i wis you would not leae it like this!it could e a reat story to work on for a few chapters!its too bad its over was really good.

Reviewer: lady_of_the_mannor
Date: 11/24/11 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

XD please please please PLEASE finish this!its sooooo good!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it. Chapter two (the conclusion) will be posted shortly. :)

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