Reviews For Disillusioned
Reviewer: lovethelife92
Date: 12/03/11 17:43
Chapter: ...In the Library

Great story and I loved the ending! :)

Reviewer: Phoenix13
Date: 11/23/11 4:57
Chapter: ...In the Library

This was very good! Two things:
1) Why is it not longer??? ;)
2) Wouldn't they learn the Disillusionment Charm in Charms class, not Transfiguration? (Just a little nitpick.)

Author's Response: Thank you! I did think about that, by the way. My conclusion was that the Disillusionment Charm is something that you can put on yourself, like self-transfiguration, and that James was described as top in transfiguration which would greatly annoy Lily. She would want to work extra hard to beat him, and thus practice outside of class. Thanks, though :)

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 11/21/11 22:23
Chapter: ...In the Library

oohhh I loved it :D Write another one ;)

Reviewer: iLuna17
Date: 11/21/11 0:19
Chapter: ...In the Library

I really liked this. It shows a unique way of changing Lily's view on James, though I do have to say her changing her mind quickly is on the verge of cliché. But you used it in a unique way, so that was really good.

On the invisible aspect: I thought that was brilliant. How Lily loved the idea of invisibility, because then she was finally alone.

Her realization at the end was also amazing. How she saw that James was going to fight Voldemort, and how she envied his eyes.

On the cliché note again: I like how at the end she isn't snogging James's face off. I like how it's just the beginning, and how she isn't all "OMG! I love him!"

All in all I really loved this. You should write another like it. :)

Ellie

Author's Response: Thank you for the honest review!

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 11/20/11 14:16
Chapter: ...In the Library

This is good, you should make it 2 parts and show Lily and James getting together. But it is very well written, good job!

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 11/20/11 14:16
Chapter: ...In the Library

This is good, you should make it 2 parts and show Lily and James getting together. But it is very well written, good job!

Reviewer: A Magical Muggle
Date: 11/20/11 2:03
Chapter: ...In the Library

This brought a smile to my face. It's such a sweet story and I love your writing style.

Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 11/19/11 19:44
Chapter: ...In the Library

This was an absolutely lovely way of determining why Lily softened toward James. And your characters were in character, so good job there. :) I had fun reading this (though I wonder if there'd be a sequel to this, one fine day, after James and Lily were together, when Lily tells him about this perhaps?). I like the flow of your writing. Good job!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 11/19/11 17:07
Chapter: ...In the Library

Oh please make a long fix! I hate one fic's because they are always sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooogood!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Tom Riddle and the Cave of Living Waters by alittletiefling 6th-7th Years
What would happen if Tom Marvolo Riddle had been adopted by well-meaning squibs?...
Molly Weasley's Apple Dumplings by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
Molly has studied history and knows the old stories, but she also knows what...
Early, Early Spring: Professor Sinistra Reflects by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
I didn't know much about Professor Sinistra, the Astronomy Professor, until...
FEATURED
It Takes Two to Tango by lucca4 3rd-5th Years
They cannot keep doing this; it is only a matter of whose resolve will break...
In The Heat Of The Morning by welshdevondragon 3rd-5th Years
Summary: In the heat of the morning, Katie and Leanne lie in the grounds...
Can't Fight the Moonlight by Acacia Carter 6th-7th Years
A life-changing disaster at work drives Neville Longbottom to seek aid from...
The History Teacher by iLuna17 6th-7th Years
Maybe he didn’t just love history, maybe he loved being a history teacher.
white on white by Padfoot11333 6th-7th Years
Three vignettes about scars, love, and sex.
CATEGORIES