Reviews For Dragon and Dove
Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 09/20/12 21:55
Chapter: Dragon and Dove

This is beautiful! I love the contrast between dragon and dove and your diction is just gorgeous! I have nothing to add to its beauty, but I would like to express concern on punctuation- the first half used it, then the last half doesn't really. Was there a purpose to that? It kind-of distracted me, but I overlooked it in order to read the poem.

My favorite line was, "steal my innocence." I thrilled at reading it. I felt like this was a love story of sorts- and it makes me want to be the dragon- or maybe the dove... but I feel sometimes like I am both. Ooh! That's another great interpretation- two sides to one person...

I must leave this review and now ponder my new train of thought!

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 07/18/12 4:32
Chapter: Dragon and Dove

Wow! Great opposites. Why has nobody given this a review????????? Beautiful poem!

Author's Response: You're racking up major brownie points here, lol. Thank you :)

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