This is perfect. The characters, the writing, the emotion. What else can I say? I love it.
Very well done! Love all chapters! I have read them, re-read them, and will probably read them again in the future! I think you hit them all point blank! Great job!
I took a slight glance at the first few words and couldn't stop laughing afterwards!!! It was soo funny!
-Livie :D
So, I stumbled across this story while looking around for something more than a romance to read, and look what I find!
What I want to say is how fantastically you wove each character's story together without making each one too alike. They all grieve in different ways, and the way that you brought that out was just simply amazing! The way you wrote Ron was most certainly one of the best characterizations I've seen of him.
Thank you for such a good read!
Simply perfect. I can think of nothing that would improve this fic.
Fred's death is, for me, the most upsetting one, and I still cry when I read it, so your depiction of its aftermath was awful to read (in a good way). Especially in Ginny's chapter, when you describe the reaction of Molly, it was just so terribly sad, and I'll admit, I cried.
I'm so glad you made Harry cry (now I sound really mean...). I just think that he hardly cries in the books, and the moments when he does are just so much more powerful. It was such a significant moment in this chapter, and the fact that he could only do it with Ginny just affirms her importance, something which I find is often overshadowed by the trio.
Well done!
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. I went into not knowing exactly how it would be, but I thought your characterization is close to spot-on. I really liked how you had Ginny react to Fred, how actually you had all of the Weasley's written. I noticed a small technical error, I'm pretty sure the furnunculus curse and jelly legs jinx should both be capitalized.
But once again, I love your characterization, and am eager to see what you have in store for the other three :)
Annie
