Reviews For My Harry Heart
Reviewer: 1000timesingoldenink
Date: 10/11/12 22:46
Chapter: In Hiding

Interesting...I like how you portray the way she feels during the war. The tone is unique; a bit depressed, but then of course it's a war!

Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 07/26/12 6:16
Chapter: In Hiding

Hey there,


So I must say that Harry/Ginny is my OTP, which is why I decided to read this one shot. It was interesting to see something from Ginny’s POV. I find her to be a difficult character to write most days, especially in first person. I just can’t seem to get into her head long enough to write a believable story with her in it. Hence it takes me forever to write usually. But, you did a good job with it. I like the emotions in the story and what you’re trying to portray overall. Yes, it might be a bit cheesy, but overall I think that the story has some good qualities. Good job keeping it in first person too. I tend to avoid writing it because I always mess up with my tenses, but I didn’t really see any errors, so good job with that. Overall, that was a good story and a good read.


~Alyssa

Reviewer: Shreeja
Date: 11/19/11 18:38
Chapter: In Hiding

Hey, that's a rather touching story. Ginny's perspective hadn't been touched much in the books and I haven't come across other fanfics on the topic (kinda new here). So, yes, it has its share of cheese, but one does tend to feel these things, and you were able to put that across. Nicely done :)

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