Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 13

WOW WONDERFUL SUPERB GREAT AWESOME PERFECT BEAUTIFUL CHARMING SPECIAL NICE PRETTY AND EVERY OTHER WORD TO DESCRIBE SOMETHING PERFECT. i REALLY LOVED THIS STORY. iT WAS GREAT AND i ENJOYED EVERY BIT OF IT. cAN'T WAIT TO START YOUR NEXT FIC.!!!!!!!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 14:50
Chapter: Chapter 12

GREAT ONCE MORE LOVIN THE UNDERPANTS THOUGH I DONT REALLY SEE WHY HE WOULD WEAR THEM BUT WHO CARES IT WAS GREAT ANYWAY GREAT WONDERFUL STORY!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 13:58
Chapter: Chapter 11

great job again I just love this story i thought that even the end of this chapter was suspensful im always ont he edge of my seat thanx for writin'

Reviewer: Potter4
Date: 11/28/04 11:03
Chapter: Chapter 13

Wow! I mean...WOW! I just finsished reading the whole thing, and believe me! Are you quite sure you're not Rowling herself? WOuldyou do me a favor and read MY fan fic? I really don't think you deserve a ten as a rating, but it's the highest I could give you... : D

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 1:30
Chapter: Chapter 10

once again, its great! Can't type much cuz its late and i dont want to wake anyone!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 1:18
Chapter: Chapter 9

another great chapter. i'm still lovin it!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 0:39
Chapter: Chapter 8

b-e-a-u beautiful! I love this story. Sorry if reviewing after every chapter is annoying, but its become habit by now! I'm wondering if maybe Dumbledore night be sending harry visions about Sirius to make him feel better. Just a thought, and Im probably wrong as usual!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/28/04 0:11
Chapter: Chapter 7

once agian, youve made agreat chapter. This is some really good writing and i really realyll ike it. IM reading it to the end, ever though its 12:00 right now. Who cares about bed when you reading a really good fanfic. Theres just the right amount of action and the right amount of.. everything!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 23:25
Chapter: Chapter 6

first off great chapter second, to the person below me, i dont mean this offensivily, but i think that the Dark Forest is not officially lpart of the hogwarts grounds. I was a littel confusidizzled too, but im not sure. Anyway, must keep reading...

Reviewer: dreamweaver1973
Date: 11/27/04 17:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

I have read all the chapters and they are great. You are a very good writer.

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 5

another great chapter. its nice to see tat Harry can just relax and be a regular kid sometime. Keep writing!

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 11/27/04 16:58
Chapter: Chapter 13

AWESOME as I have said before. One suggestion- write a sequal to it. Like when Harry's term starts. Anyway good job and I'll be looking for a sequal!!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 4

Again, another beautiful chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: VernonT
Date: 11/27/04 16:37
Chapter: Chapter 13

This is an excellently done piece. Your storyline and characterizations make me wonder why you are not writing your own books. Keep writing. I would agree with others that your submissions could use a bit more editing to weed out verb disagreements, missing/misplaced/misused words, that sort of thing. However the overall quality of your story shines through. Well done. Full marks!!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 16:15
Chapter: Chapter 3

happy happy joy joy! ba da ba ba bah, im lovin' it! This is a great story. Love the way that things are turning out. Hoep that Harry takes some more hits at Sanpe, there really really funny. Great jon so far!

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 14:54
Chapter: Chapter 2

another awesome chapter. Im glad that Harry told Ron and Hermione, it would have become too overwhelming if he hadn't.

Reviewer: muggle1311
Date: 11/27/04 14:33
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really good story. Must get on reading the next chapters now so...

Reviewer: ginny15
Date: 11/26/04 22:47
Chapter: Chapter 13

Wow! That was impressive. I could critque your grammar and punctuation, and I don't entirely agree with some of your interpretations of the characters' personalities, but the story itself is brilliant. (I'm a huge Harry/Ginny shipper, by the way.) Keep writing. I'm off to read about the 6th year now.

Reviewer: Jennifer_Cairns
Date: 11/26/04 21:48
Chapter: Chapter 13

So good! The best fanfic I have ever read! I'm so glad there is another coming! I got so into the story I read it for 3 days straight at work... hope I don't get sacked!! ;)

Reviewer: School owl
Date: 11/26/04 16:40
Chapter: Chapter 13

Awesome. Are you J.K Rowling?

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