Reviewer: AngelEJC
Date: 02/19/11 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 13

Two words:



Reviewer: I so want 2 b magic
Date: 12/23/07 8:39
Chapter: Chapter 13


Reviewer: Snowman
Date: 08/02/07 22:24
Chapter: Chapter 13

Oh wow, that was wonderful, starting on the sequal now, thanks so much!

Reviewer: potter_mad_4_eva
Date: 01/26/07 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 11

if aurors are useing the shrieking shack as home base where will remus transform?

Reviewer: DBRG
Date: 05/22/06 14:19
Chapter: Chapter 2

Dudders a wizard well that something

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 03/28/05 14:34
Chapter: Chapter 13

Just read the whole thing! I loved it loved it loved it! It was amazing, I cant wait to read your version of 6th year now. Aww and my favorite concept is that Harry can use his mind to visit Sirius!

Reviewer: Azkaban13
Date: 03/07/05 9:45
Chapter: Chapter 13

wow i just read the whole thing and it was amazing!!!!

Reviewer: Dan_D_Lion
Date: 03/06/05 17:02
Chapter: Chapter 13

wow.. I absolutely loved this story. It was awesome! The best! Going to read your other story! :D

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 02/01/05 22:02
Chapter: Chapter 13

Yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!! I finished in record time!! whats it been two three days?? Or something like that. Great story and tomorrow i'm going to start on the sequel!! And I dont have to wait for chapters til I catch up!!! YAYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 01/31/05 17:54
Chapter: Chapter 5


Reviewer: StarryNight
Date: 01/31/05 16:47
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great first chapter!!! Even though I started kinda late, but I dont have to wait for updates. This story is so sweet it made me cry.

Reviewer: kaypotter
Date: 01/26/05 21:47
Chapter: Chapter 13

woohooo i love it so much!!

Reviewer: kaypotter
Date: 01/26/05 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 8

wonderful story i love it

Reviewer: Dannie
Date: 01/18/05 19:40
Chapter: Chapter 13

Excellent story!!! i've reallly enjoyed it!! i can't wait to read the sequel! keep up the great writing.

Reviewer: meant2b
Date: 01/16/05 8:30
Chapter: Chapter 13

that was an awesome story! this one was the first one i ever read on here and then i just found out you wrote a sequel so i had to refresh my memory...greatgreatgreatgreat!!!

Reviewer: Tobang
Date: 01/10/05 14:57
Chapter: Chapter 13

i loved it i loved it i loved i loved it....... damn that was awsome and you didnt leave a cliff hanger wich i am thankful for. Did i mention i loved the story?

Reviewer: igotbannedfroma2k
Date: 12/16/04 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 13

Just for the record... there is a sequal by terry. it's called 5th year and it's just as good (yet not completed). Click on the name "terry" then "stories by terry" and it is 6th year. a really great sequal...

Reviewer: wizardress
Date: 12/15/04 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

great first chapter!! i just started reading it and i really like it. ur style is good, it's very faithful to the books. k gonna go read the other chapters.

Reviewer: HellBlazer
Date: 12/12/04 22:39
Chapter: Chapter 13

Really nice story. I loved the use of words. But I do have some suggestions: 1. Does Remus and Dumbledore ALWAYS have to be there when harry wakes up or when his scar starts hurting. 2. Harry needs to spend more time with his friends (he is just a 16 year old after all) 3. Harry should be more thankful (surpirsed at least) when he was first able to speak to sirius in his dreams. 4. It seems unrealistic that Harry can learn any type of spell etc. with so much ease. At least he should try for like 30 mins. 5. The days seemed a bit messy. I was asking myself "is it day? is it night? is it friday yet?" 6. Ron seems a bit too shady for some reason... 7. Hagrid appears like twice while harry is supposed to adore him. Enough said. 8. Harry is the tiniest bit to specific about what he sees whan his scar hurts. It just seems too good to be true when he can see and hear everything around him when he is in immense pain. 9. Does Remus follow him EVERYWHERE? God! Give him some space! 10. Too little mystery. The plot was kind of already spelled out for you before the climax actually happened. It's like Harry and Dumbledore already knew everything before it actually happened That's the top 10 things. But all in all, the best story I've read so far on this site (I have wayyy too much suggestions for the other stories to list them all) I rate you a 9.5, but since there is no 9.5 I'll give u a 10. Great story, must've taken you like a month to write!

Reviewer: dark_soul
Date: 12/11/04 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 13

this was a great story. I just loved reading it. You should make another story and his sixth year.

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