Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 05/15/12 3:39
Chapter: The Hunt: Den of Wolves
I'm really enjoying the landscape descriptions - the high country, the forest. A good story needs good scenery, and this one has plenty of it.
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Most of these places are real (Shivering Stone certainly is, though so far as I’m aware there’s no magical gateway to a werewolf village in that part of the Cheviots). The glen and woods are in Scotland (Scotland isn’t far away) and the bastle isn’t far away, either.
-N-
Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 05/12/12 20:24
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
This just gets better and better!
Great to see Lavender getting nearer to a cure for her wounds.
Dacia and her girls are good additions to your ever growing interconnected cast of characters.
They all fit in so well.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Lavender's "cure" is pretty drastic, and as you know, it will take a few years bofore things work out for her.Auror Amber Skoll has already made on appearance in "Strangers" and she'll be back.
So far my future for Harry and co is holding together. :-)-N-
Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/12/12 13:35
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Great cliff hanger can't wait to see how Harry gets out of this one
Author's Response: Thanks. The advantage/disadvantage of flipping back and forth between timelines means that you'll need to wait two chapters, but you know that he will escape (although you should know that anyway). -N-
Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 22:32
Chapter: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions
Wow so the pumpkin juice is involved, I can see Ron doing the juice as a joke but letting hermione out to make a fool of herself but intend to idealize their relationship so imag me wrong there
Author's Response: It is indeed. Sometimes joks backfire, and (in my opinion) Ron will always be a little scared of "the big brain". You'll find out more details later. -N-
Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 19:11
Chapter: The Snare: Three Caged Birds
I don't think ronwpuld have jumped to that conclusion otherwise good chapter. I thing the new super strong pumpkin juice is causing part of this but we will see
Author's Response: Ron tends to lash out when he's unhappy and upset. At the moment, he's unhappy and upset. So, you think that the pumpkin juice has something to do with it, eh? -N-
Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 17:19
Chapter: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies
Ok, I'm sure there is more going on herebut I'm not sure about Ginny. I know she is more like the twins then she Percy but she seems to be going a little over the edge.
Author's Response: There is more going on here.
If you think that Ginny is a little over the edge, you're right.-N-
Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 14:46
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit
Oh this one sounds like its going to be fun, can't wait to see how this one turns out.
Author's Response: Thanks.
"This one" is written in a non-linear style, but at least it's close to completion.-N-
Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/11/12 3:25
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Oh no! How is Harry going to get them all out now?? It was interesting to see how Lavender had changed but also the traits that had stayed the same. I'll be interested to see what is going on with Ginny and Hermione being drunk and acting weird. I would also like to see more Neville, Hermione, Ron, etc. like the previous chapter. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Perhaps he doesn’t get them out. Except, of course, you already know that he’s hurt when her turns up looking for Ginny. This story has now reached the point where there will be more answers than questions. Next, more from Gus Tavistock and the Fiscal. And Ginny and Harry have a far from private discussion.-N-
Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/11/12 1:38
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Oh, my goodness. This is just getting too good. Another cliffhanger: the suspense is killing me.
Looking forward to more of any story. :)
- Katie
Author's Response: Katie
Thanks. I really have no idea what will be next from me. It almost certainly won’t be this, or Strangers. -N-
Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/10/12 20:52
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
You had me on edge from the start of the chapter to the end! I can't wait for more. I love how now that Lavender is "stable" she is insisting on talking to Harry about what has been going on since his absence. Lets not worry that she is in a Werewolf colony, but that Harry must know about Ginny not being her self and Ron and Hermione had another row. HaHa...oh Lavender!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I had to smile at the cunning way you fitted the words Lavender and "stable" into the same sentence. She's still injured and she's trapped inside a werewolf village just before the full moon. Why on eartnwould a minor inconvenience like that prevent her from gossiping?-N-
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/10/12 16:58
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Always exciting reading!! Fantastic!
Author's Response: :-D
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/10/12 16:58
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Always exciting reading!! Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thanks -N-
Reviewer: dawndragon2
Date: 05/10/12 16:06
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
I really love your story cant wait for more chapters
Author's Response: Thank you. You'll have to wait, I'm afraid, but hopefully not for long. -N-
Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 05/10/12 15:06
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door
Wow, great chapter! This is the kind of suspenseful, exciting, and well-written action I've come to expect from you, Northumbrian. It's really interesting to see all the details of your epic tale slowly come together, and to learn where some of your original characters come from. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. :-D
The two timelines are (as you've probably noticed) rapidly coming together. The next "Hunt" chapter will have a lot of action, too. Before that, Harry must deal with: Neville's revelations; remand prisoner G M Weasley; Augustus Tavistock; and Luna examining the contents of Ginny's knicker drawer. A diffeent sort of action.More soon.
-N-
Reviewer: Luna432
Date: 05/09/12 1:53
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit
I just wanted to let you know that I love this story! I love how you switched back and forth from the different places. I can't wait till you finish it!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you, I’ve just got the next chapter back from my betas and I hope to submit it soon.
-N-
Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 04/23/12 21:33
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes
Some Neville! Nice chapter and great fic! :)
Author's Response: Thanks.
You’ll see a lot more of Neville as this story continues.-N-
Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 04/23/12 14:08
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes
Oh snap! This was an excellent, excellent chapter! I love your Neville and Hannah. :) Ron, Ron, Ron. I liked Neville's perspective that illuminated what happened in a better light.
I'm looking forward to more of any story! We're back the "Hunt" next, correct? I can only assume/guess what will happen to Lavender.
- Katie
Author's Response: Katie
Thanks for the review. I'm rather fond of Neville and Hannah. Ron is not at his best.Next is another "Hunt" chapter, yes. Harry and Lavender, what a team! You've read my other stuff, so you probably can guess what will happen to Lavender.
-N-
Reviewer: susielou222
Date: 04/23/12 6:06
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes
Is it just me or does Mark D’Arque sound alot like Dark Mark.... Hmm..... I have my theories.
Author's Response: It does indeed. -N-
Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/23/12 4:15
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes
Ahhhhhhhhhhh! Cliffhanger! Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Next, we're back in the forest with Harry and Lavender. -N-
Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 04/23/12 3:44
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes
Very interesting! And I loved the Churchill reference!
Author's Response: Thanks, it's not one of his more "inspiring" lines, but it is inspired. And hermione is the only person likely to have heard it. -N-
