Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: dawndragon2
Date: 05/10/12 16:06
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

I really love your story cant wait for more chapters

Author's Response: Thank you. You'll have to wait, I'm afraid, but hopefully not for long. -N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 05/10/12 15:06
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

Wow, great chapter! This is the kind of suspenseful, exciting, and well-written action I've come to expect from you, Northumbrian. It's really interesting to see all the details of your epic tale slowly come together, and to learn where some of your original characters come from. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. :-D
The two timelines are (as you've probably noticed) rapidly coming together. The next "Hunt" chapter will have a lot of action, too. Before that, Harry must deal with: Neville's revelations; remand prisoner G M Weasley; Augustus Tavistock; and Luna examining the contents of Ginny's knicker drawer. A diffeent sort of action.
More soon.
-N-

Reviewer: Luna432
Date: 05/09/12 1:53
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

I just wanted to let you know that I love this story! I love how you switched back and forth from the different places. I can't wait till you finish it!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you, I’ve just got the next chapter back from my betas and I hope to submit it soon. -N-

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 04/23/12 21:33
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Some Neville! Nice chapter and great fic! :)

Author's Response: Thanks.
You’ll see a lot more of Neville as this story continues.
-N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 04/23/12 14:08
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Oh snap! This was an excellent, excellent chapter! I love your Neville and Hannah. :) Ron, Ron, Ron. I liked Neville's perspective that illuminated what happened in a better light.

I'm looking forward to more of any story! We're back the "Hunt" next, correct? I can only assume/guess what will happen to Lavender.
- Katie

Author's Response: Katie
Thanks for the review. I'm rather fond of Neville and Hannah. Ron is not at his best.
Next is another "Hunt" chapter, yes. Harry and Lavender, what a team! You've read my other stuff, so you probably can guess what will happen to Lavender.
-N-

Reviewer: susielou222
Date: 04/23/12 6:06
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Is it just me or does Mark D’Arque sound alot like Dark Mark.... Hmm..... I have my theories.

Author's Response: It does indeed. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/23/12 4:15
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Ahhhhhhhhhhh! Cliffhanger! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Next, we're back in the forest with Harry and Lavender. -N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 04/23/12 3:44
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Very interesting! And I loved the Churchill reference!

Author's Response: Thanks, it's not one of his more "inspiring" lines, but it is inspired. And hermione is the only person likely to have heard it. -N-

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/23/12 2:26
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

Hmmm so the key is in the Pumpkin Juice...I hope our talented Aurors figure it out. I enjoyed this chapter which focuses on Neville and Hannah instead of Harry, it kept the story fresh. Poor Ron...I really do feel bad for him. I hope that him and Hermione work things out. I look forward to the moment that everything comes together...can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This chapter provides you with a lot of much needed information. Plus, it allows me to sneak an entire Neville/Hannah chapter into the story. :-D
Rons hurts are entirely self inflicted, unlike Harry's. There are only two more "Hunt" chapters before Harry reaches the Interlude.
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 04/22/12 23:45
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

I love the relationship between Neville and Hannah. Now we know why Hermione is so upset with Ron, and with good reason I might add...but do I detect some office gossip (Hermione going to France with her Boss) Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
As Lavender would tell you, just because it's gossip, that doesn't mean it isn't true. This chapter is the midway point of the story, and from now on, there will be more answers than questions.
-N-

Reviewer: The owl
Date: 04/22/12 21:07
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

I have a love/hate relationship with your cliff hangers. On one hand, they are so well written, and on the other, I am always so involved with your characters that I hate waiting for the next bit. The dual narrative has worked very well throughout this story. Seeing the links between the two sections has kept me interested and longing for more.

I am so glad to see Neville with Hannah. They seem to fit together very naturally. I am so glad that he hasn’t been tempted to patronize her yet, and that he worked up the courage to admit his full feelings for her. Ron and Hermione by contrast seem very shaky. I feel sorry for Ron, thinking that Hermione actually is with Jenkins. Mind you, Ron always has been an idiot when it comes to Hermione, so maybe it is a little bit deserved.

I loved your take on Kreacher. His little speech reminded me of The Badly Fitting Coat (which I also loved by the way). Robards too was interesting, seeing him from Neville and Hannah’s differing perspectives. Basically, I love all of your characterization and plot. My only nit-pick is the use of stubbornly in two consecutive sentences:
“…but Ron stubbornly refused.
‘I got myself into this mess. I need to get myself out,’ said Ron stubbornly.”

Apart from that, this is a well written and well thought out fic, and I cannot wait to find out what happens to Lavender, Hannah and the rest.

-Sophie-

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Some people like cliffhangers, others hate them. This story, where you need to wait two chapters for the resolution, is bound to annoy some people. However, I wanted to try writing a dual-narrative/flashback story. It's proved to be more difficult than I expected.

Neville and Hannah seem to fit together so well. Neither of them are brimming with confidence, but they are nice people. Ron has brought his troubles on himself. But when they fall out, they can be so stubborn that reconciliation takes a while.

Kreacher mellowed during DH, but there is, I hope, still a hint of the old Kreacher in him. Luna, will, of course, disagree. I enjoyed writing the Neville/Hannah/Robards interaction. To Neville he's the fearsome "boss", to Hannah, he's "Granddad Robbie" one of her regulars. Thanks for the nitpick. I don't know how I missed that. I'll fix it now.

More soon

-N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 04/10/12 19:31
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Really great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you :-D -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/10/12 18:52
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Incredible!!! Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :-D -N-

Reviewer: JCJ58
Date: 04/09/12 17:31
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

great story! looking forward to updates

Author's Response: Thanks. More soon. -N-

Reviewer: GinevraPotter00
Date: 04/09/12 3:05
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Nice chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 04/09/12 1:12
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Oh gosh. I'm not really sure what to think. So much is going on! Lavender...Dacia...Death Eaters. And next we're back to Ginny and Neville's story, am I correct? This was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to more of any story. :)
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks.
Next is a flashback within a flashback as Neville takes his girlfriend to the Ministry ball and you catch a glimpse of what's really going on (I hope). Strangers 14 (Interlude: Three Families) is now in the queue. It's full of werewolve, too.
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 04/08/12 20:31
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

What a great chapter, as always, I am dying to know more. Does Harry get the girls out along with keeping Lavender safe? What is Scabior going to do? HIs retaliation is not going to be good for Harry, I have a bad feeling about that. You left me biting my nails.
~Cherise

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The great thing about alternating chapters is that you won't get the answers until chapter 11 (which is called "Wolves at the door).
-N-

Reviewer: Youss
Date: 04/08/12 13:06
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Nice chapter again. Can't wait for more, but probably have to. I also think I found a small mistake. You wrote:
‘Amber, any sign of anyone?’ Dacia asked. The tawny haired girl shook her head. ‘Good, keep your eyes open. Jade, go and get that bag from Amber, please.’

When the middle sister returned, Dacia Skoll smiled understandingly at Harry.

But at chapter 7 you say that Jade is the youngest of the sisters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I hope that you won't have to wait too long.
You're right, how did I miss that? 'll fix it immediately.
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 04/08/12 12:43
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Wow!!
That chapter had everything, scary, touching, Harry in danger, some very nasty old enemies turning up and then a terrifying ending.
More, more please!

Author's Response: Thanks.
I've just submitted the next chapter of Strangers, but once that's approved, the next chapter of this is ready to go.
-N-

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/08/12 11:54
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Oh no, Lavender! You're always good at throwing a twist in there at the end! I'll be interested to see how Harry makes it from this moment to the moment he finds Ginny and I'm also anxious to find out what happened at the Minstry event that Neville was about to tell Harry at the end of the last chapter. Great job - can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
The next chapter (Snakeslayer and Snakes) will deal with Neville, Hannah, Ron and Hermione. We are (as you've realised) getting close to the point where the two timelines meet.
-N-

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