Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 19:27
Chapter: The Snare: Three Caged Birds

Great chapter, Always love reading the dialogue between Ron and Hermione :-)

Author's Response: Thanks. there will be more Ron and Hermione later. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 19:02
Chapter: The Hunt: Nice Weather for Fish

Ooo, Fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 18:53
Chapter: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

Haha Very entertaining to read!

Author's Response: Thanks, Harry wasn't having a good time. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 18:39
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolf Hunt

Wonderful chapter...Looking forward to reading about this mission!

Author's Response: Thanks, there's a lot going on in this chapter, too. 0N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 18:23
Chapter: Interlude: Magpies in Flight

Hmm, Wonder whom is responsible for the chaos here... I cannot wait to see how things develop

Author's Response: You will find out, eventually. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/29/12 18:10
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

Interesting introduction...You caught my attention :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, hopefully things will get more complicated, er, I mean interesting. :-D -N-

Reviewer: kheldar
Date: 05/29/12 13:36
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

Fantastic, as usual! Tavistock is so slimy, and he seems to raise an unusual amount of suspicion by not wanting the girls to say anything at all - could he possibly have something to do with the Hellion's behavior? I suppose we'll have to wait and see! I'm glad that there doesn't seem to be a problem between Harry and Ginny!

Author's Response: Thanks.
Tavistock certainly has an agenda, he is employed by the Harpies. Is he eacting in the players best interest? Is he even acting in the club's best interest? Time will tell. There is no major problem between Harry and Ginny.

Reviewer: BSirius
Date: 05/29/12 6:02
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

I have read so many fanfics but after coming across several really good ones that were never completed and never will be, I had decided to not read any more incomplete stories. It just leads to disappointment when the story has no end. I do not like to wait on updates either because I read so many fanfics that I practically have to start from the beginning again to get back into the story fully whenever the update is finally posted. So, I have only read completed stories for a long time now. That is, until I started reading your stories. I am so impressed with your talent that I keep your author page in my Favs and check it periodically for any updates, then get all excited when I see an update or a new story. I love it too that all your stories are part of one whole. Sadly, everything else I have read since reading your stories has not been near as interesting. Thank you so much for this story and all your others. I have loved every single one (reading several more than once) and cannot wait for the next posting. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the kind words.
I am extremely guilty of incomplete stories. I have, I admit, started far too many chaptered fics. I really must finish one or two of them. This has five chapters to go, two are almost ready to go to my betas, the remaining three are roughly drafted. And I hope to have it marked as complete within a few months, and then I’ll alternate “Strangers” with “Aurors and Schoolgirls” until one of them is done (A&S probably, as Strangers is only just at the halfway stage). Epithalamium and Molly and her Daughter will be sporadic, and MLT is on hold, at least until I get A&S finished.
Writing only one (canon compliant) timeline makes life easy for me in a lot of ways. I have an expanding cast of minor and original characters, all of whom are fleshed out. I sometimes make timeline errors and have to retrofit them, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/29/12 3:16
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

Very good! I'm glad we're getting more answers. I really liked this chapter. Everything was very well written.

- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks Katie.
This story is planned to be seventeen chapters, so by now you should be getting some of the answers. There is a lot going on.

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/29/12 1:51
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

What a wonderful chapter...thank goodness some questions are being answered. I can't wait until Linny's interview, I also can't wait to hear how Harry is going to escape the werewolf camp. Those naughty, naughty Slytherins', I never suspected them! Sorry took me so long to comment. It was wonderful, like you produce anything else, lol. Can't wait to read some more of any story!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You will get more answers in the next chapter (The Hunt: Tooth and Claw) which will also be the last of the “Hunt” chapters as Harry finally approaches the “Interlude” (way back in chapter 2) with all of his aches and injuries finally explained. I’ve just realised that whatever arrives next from me will contain Lavender. Whether it’s this, Browns, or Strangers.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 05/28/12 16:16
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

Wow, great story, please update.

Author's Response: Thank you. I will. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/27/12 18:47
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

Love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks. -N-

Reviewer: Emmasbiggestfan
Date: 05/27/12 17:17
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

I absolutely love your work!! This just keeps getting better and better!!! When will the next chapter be done?

Author's Response: Thank you. My plan is to submit both chapter 2 of Brown, and the next chapter of "Strangers" before the next chapter of this. -N-

Reviewer: Emmasbiggestfan
Date: 05/26/12 16:10
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

I cant wait to read the rest of this story!! When will you have it finished? Please make it sometime soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I will be posting the next chapter within the next few days

Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 05/15/12 3:51
Chapter: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

Ginny the Quidditch hooligan!

Some good ideas are, shall we say, less obvious than others.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

This seemed obvious to me, though all is not as it seems.


Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 05/15/12 3:39
Chapter: The Hunt: Den of Wolves

I'm really enjoying the landscape descriptions - the high country, the forest. A good story needs good scenery, and this one has plenty of it.

Author's Response:
Thank you.

Most of these places are real (Shivering Stone certainly is, though so far as I’m aware there’s no magical gateway to a werewolf village in that part of the Cheviots). The glen and woods are in Scotland (Scotland isn’t far away) and the bastle isn’t far away, either.


Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 05/12/12 20:24
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

This just gets better and better!
Great to see Lavender getting nearer to a cure for her wounds.
Dacia and her girls are good additions to your ever growing interconnected cast of characters.
They all fit in so well.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Lavender's "cure" is pretty drastic, and as you know, it will take a few years bofore things work out for her.
Auror Amber Skoll has already made on appearance in "Strangers" and she'll be back.
So far my future for Harry and co is holding together. :-)

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/12/12 13:35
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

Great cliff hanger can't wait to see how Harry gets out of this one

Author's Response: Thanks. The advantage/disadvantage of flipping back and forth between timelines means that you'll need to wait two chapters, but you know that he will escape (although you should know that anyway). -N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 22:32
Chapter: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

Wow so the pumpkin juice is involved, I can see Ron doing the juice as a joke but letting hermione out to make a fool of herself but intend to idealize their relationship so imag me wrong there

Author's Response: It is indeed. Sometimes joks backfire, and (in my opinion) Ron will always be a little scared of "the big brain". You'll find out more details later. -N-

Reviewer: ckwright51
Date: 05/11/12 19:11
Chapter: The Snare: Three Caged Birds

I don't think ronwpuld have jumped to that conclusion otherwise good chapter. I thing the new super strong pumpkin juice is causing part of this but we will see

Author's Response: Ron tends to lash out when he's unhappy and upset. At the moment, he's unhappy and upset. So, you think that the pumpkin juice has something to do with it, eh? -N-

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