Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/15/15 1:25
Chapter: The Snare: Three Caged Birds

What a great chapter. I guess Harry is practicing tough love. That headline was brutal. And, the word "another" was used showing bars had been trashed before. Poor Ron. He's so loyal to Ginny that he can't admit it was her fault she and Harry were covered in blood. Are you hinting that Ginny might have an alcohol problem?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/11/15 1:35
Chapter: The Hunt: Nice Weather for Fish

That was mean of Linny to report to Harry where Ginny was. He didn't need to know that. She seemed to delight in hinting that Ginny was at a party with someone. Neither Ginny or Harry seems very happy.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/11/15 1:07
Chapter: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

I think it was better that Harry usd the same sort of handcuffs on all three of the Harpies. Ginny was in the wrong. She had no business disrespecting Harry like that.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/09/15 1:23
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolf Hunt

Going into a werewolf camp doesn't seem like a very fun stakeout. I know they're not there for Auror entertainment but it sounds boring. I suppose there will be excitement and lots to do but also a lot of danger. I'd probably make a terrible Auror.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/09/15 0:57
Chapter: Interlude: Magpies in Flight

OMG! Ginny was in the pub that Harry was "raiding"? How embarrassing for both of them. Don't tell me she was the one who aimed a hex at Harry.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/09/15 0:48
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

I wonder if George would ever had paid back i wonder if George would ever pay back Harry. Maybe Harry didn't need it but it was a nice gesture. If I were a Death Eater at-large I'd be terrified knowing Harry and his crew were after me. I'm surprised I haven't read this story earlier.

Author's Response: I don't think that Fred would have paid Harry back, except by offering free stuff. George, I'm not so sure about. The hunt for the escaped Death Eaters would, I think, take years. This is not my most popular story, I suspect one of the reasons is the disjointed way I chose to write it. -N-

Reviewer: Cinderella Angelina
Date: 01/21/15 19:08
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

I've been doing something extra tiresome at work today, and this story kept me company this afternoon. I really think it may be your best, with the creative construction and the interrelated plots.

So thank you for writing it. I very much enjoyed reading the whole thing at once, after waiting for the new chapters to come out. :)

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

When I started to plot this one, i knew that I wanted to flash back and forwards in time. I soon discovered that it isn't easy. I learned a lot while writing this one, particularly about plotting and flashbacks.

Although this story doesn't get the reads that "Grave Days" and "Strangers at Drakeshaugh" get, it's a story I'm proud of.


Reviewer: sejackson91
Date: 02/26/14 5:22
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Man I take a few months off reading fanfiction (almost a year to be fair I was traveling a lot and had to focus more on finishing college) and you add some new stories and finally finish hunters and prey! I was really excited to see it was done and you did a great job!! I particularly liked how it ties all the gang together for this one. I especially think the Robards/Hannah relationship is great. Although I really enjoy your family stories, you tell the best auror office stories. Great job, can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and apologies for the delayed reply; I've had a busy few weeks.
You can expect more updates of Friends and Foes, and other stories, although it will be a while before you see either Robards or Hannah. I hope to get another Auror Office (at least an MIT) story done soon, too.

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 02/08/14 6:09
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Just finished, and it was a great read. Any idea when you'll be starting your sequel?

Author's Response: Thank you.
i started the sequel almost four weeks ago. :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/04/14 11:56
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Hehe, Love the end of the chapter. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks, more soon. We'll see how many of my unfinished stories I can mark as complete this year. -N-

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 02/04/14 11:39
Chapter: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

And the next chapter is not the conclusion of this last conversation lol. This is the most frustrating story I have read on this site, but in a good way. I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story was an experiment on my part. When I planned it, I realised that if I wrote from beginning to end in a straight line it would be action/adventure in the werewolf village, Harry/Ginny angst in Scotland and action at the village (and elsewhere) again. By flipping between the two I could have a "action" chapter and a "relationship" chapter. I've learned a lot.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall
Date: 01/07/14 16:30
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

WOW! You finished this one in a sprint! And still up to your excellent standard. A little birdie told me that you have started Friends and Foes already,so does that mean that you are going to wait until you are finished with Strangers before you go back to Aurors & Schoolgirls? I am looking forward to the young Harry & Co. tracking down the Slytherins, but I'm dying to know how Fennella Grey got away with breaking into the Ministry!

Author's Response: Thank you.
I had intended to finish this story in 2013 but personal issues over the summer delayed me and, in the end the chapters came in a bit of a rush (for me, anyway - I’m not fast). To be honest, the prologue, and chapters 1, 2, 4 & 5 of F&F have been substantially done for more than 12 months. (Chapter 3 needs a complete rewrite.) I am currently working on both Strangers and A&S (and Epithalamium, a bit), and I’ll be sending the first few chapters of F&F to my beta soon.

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/06/14 17:26
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

This was such a good and intriguing story! I will definitely have to back through and read it from start to finish to get the whole picture!

I am looking forward to reading more from you of any story - all of them are so good!
- Katie

Author's Response: Thank you, Katie
Among (many) other things, I’m looking to tidy this story up a little. There are a few sections which need improvement.

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 01/05/14 17:52
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Good to see Terry Boot figure out Harry and Co. might have been a bit circumspect with regards to 'hunting' Finnella. Yup you can't find Harry's pad with out Ginny's help. Good chapter please Sir can we have more? Probably isn't the first time and won't be the last time Terry wonders what Harry's info flow priorities are. It is actually pretty simple who needs to know what and when does he need to get all the info to the DA (those Galleons still work).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story is now marked complete. However, you can expect a sequel: Friends and Foes, very soon. As for the DA Galleons, they’re a fairly basic communications device. Harry is looking for something better.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 01/04/14 12:16
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

I'm pretty much devoted to all your stories, but this one is amazing and oh my gosh!! There's more to come?! I can't wait!! Bloody brilliant fantastic writing!!! It should be a hardback on my bookshelf!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, and thanks for being such a regular reviewer.
You should see the sequel very soon, but I’m also working on several of my other unfinished tales.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/04/14 8:39
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Great end to the story and nice to see Terry and Fenella getting together.
Looking forward to the follow up, there are still some nasties out there to be rounded up.

Author's Response: Thanks
I knew that Lavender and Mark were doomed (for the moment) so Terry and Fenella were the alternative. :-D Expect the sequel soon.

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 01/04/14 5:22
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Great chapter - I love this story and it's plot! The inventions that you have created are imaginative and really entwine the muggle and wizarding world together. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks I’m glad you’ve enjoyed this, but there is no next chapter. It’s my second completed “novel” (I don’t count Tales of the Battle). There will, however, be a sequel. ;-D -N-

Reviewer: Betamax
Date: 01/04/14 3:52
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

Nice conclusion to the H&P. I've been reading this story since the beginning and it was entertaining the entire way through. Nice work.

I'm trying to remember, was Goyle killing Colin part of the cannon or your fiction? Either way it's nice to see that part of the story get introduced.

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I've certainly tried to entertain.
Goyle killing Colin happened in "Tales of the Battle" so far as I know it's not canon. I'm pretty certain I made it up, mainly because JKR identified the Killers of Fred, Tonks, and Lupin.

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 12/22/13 21:38
Chapter: Aftermath: Truths and Consequences

I figured the after action review was going to go south. For crying out loud Dumbledore's Army ws better organized at Collin's funeral (Grave Days) the delay on the ministy end was insane. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I'm glad you think that the DA were better organised, Harry agrees. Change is needed. More soon.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 12/22/13 12:07
Chapter: Aftermath: Truths and Consequences

Another great chapter, things are really working out now.
What's in Fenella's letter? Will she nail the baddies? Hope so!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. With most of the loose ends tied up, all you need to know is what Fenella is doing. You'll find out soon. -N-

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