Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/17/15 0:47
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

That was a good ending. You tidied things up but left some loose endings so you could write another related story. Thanks for writing this story. It seemed to have kind of a slow start but once you got going it was very interesting. I especially liked how you wrote the big battle scene.

Author's Response: This story is an important one in my series. It’s the one which defines Lavender, introduces Mark, fleshes out Susan and Terry, and moves the Harry/Ginny relationship forwards. At least I hope it does.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/17/15 0:21
Chapter: Aftermath: Truths and Consequences

I love Kreacher. It's so sweet how he takes care of Harry. I hate that when someone asks so many questions and doesn't wait for answers. I can imagine how Harry felt under Molly's questioning.

Author's Response: I’d really like to write more about Kreacher, but when? Although she means well, Molly can be overbearing at times.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/16/15 23:53
Chapter: Prey: The Strange Snake Bites

Lavender has been hurt enough by all of what she's been through. I hope she survives this battle. I liked the hair cutting charm. It came in very handy.

Author's Response: Lavender will be back. As for the charm, I wanted Ron to save the day with an off-the wall solution. It’s something he’s good at.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/16/15 11:58
Chapter: Prey: An Owl and two Alpha Males

It's so nice that Lavender is feeling better. You almost made me feel bad for Rabastan. I'm thinking it might have been better if Lavender hadn't dressed in Auror clothing but that was probably all she or Harry had.

Author's Response: Lavender was restricted to Harry’s wardrobe, which was itself restricted.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/16/15 8:57
Chapter: Prey: Lioness Snarls, Badger Baited

I thought Ginny was going to be arrested again. I agree with Ginny--why is she there if she can't talk.

Author's Response: You can’t keep Ginny quiet forever.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/16/15 3:08
Chapter: Prey: Welsh Green and Hebridean Black

So, the identity cards can serve as Portkeys in an emergency? I've managed to use simple phrases in French or Italian in my writing, but I think your use of Welsh is much more difficult.

Author's Response: They can, it’s a new experimental item. Using Welsh required a lot of research.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/16/15 2:35
Chapter: Prey: Badger and Raven Go Hunting

Susan and Terry must be very disappointed at being shoved into lesser positions in the investigation. At least we know MLE isn't sexist.

Author's Response: They’re up against the old-fashioned way in which the Auror Office is run. I’ve always wondered how much sexism exists in the magical world. Men tend to be physically stronger, making it easier for them to subjugate women. I very much doubt that magic works like that, so for centuries wizards have known that witches are there equal.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/15/15 23:23
Chapter: The Snare: Beater Grouses

I think I'd like to know a little more about Linney. I don't know why but I hope some incriminating evidence show up at the flat.

Author's Response: You’ll find out soon enough.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/15/15 2:51
Chapter: The Hunt: Tooth and Claw

I guess you should never underestimate Lavender. And, she got bitten accidentally on purpose. Hopefully, her life will improve except for that one day out of the month. I'm a little surprised Harry left people behind and went to see Ginny. I'm sure you has a reason fo d

Author's Response: This chapter represents a turning point for Lavender in my stories. It changes her relationship with Harry, too. Harry should not have left, but he’s worried about Ginny.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/15/15 1:09
Chapter: The Snare: Legal Lizard

What is up with Linny? She sounds like she is an enemy rather than a friend. Does she have a crush on Harry? Or some strange vendetta against Ginny? Maybe Linny's possession of Alcoholic Pumpkin Juice can lead to the people they are trying to capture.

Author's Response: Lots of great speculation here. It may sound cruel, but I love it when I manage to lead readers to a logical, but not quite correct, conclusion.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/15/15 0:26
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolves at the Door

This is getting very exciting. I hope Harry can get Dacia, her three daughters, and Lavender out of there. It almost sounds hopeless but Harry has to have some tricks up his robes.

Author's Response: Thanks, I was trying to rack up the excitement in this chapter.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/14/15 23:59
Chapter: The Snare: Snakeslayer and Snakes

So who is the unshaven man? It's like you've plotted to keep me up late reading. I must say I wasn't interested in reading about Harry's journey and waiting to locate Lestrange, but I'm really interested in how he story's going now. Did you say this was your first story? I think your writing has improved over time although this story is certainly well written.

Author's Response: My first completed novel-length story was Grave Days. This was the second (unless you count “Tales of the Battle” – which I regard as a series of interconnected one-shots, not a novel).

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/14/15 23:30
Chapter: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

That's terrible. Did Lavender arrive there because she's on a mission? I hope Harry can get everyone who's supposed to be out of there, out safely.

Author's Response: This is long before Lavender joins the Auror office, so no, she’s not on a mission.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/14/15 23:11
Chapter: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

Great chapter. I'm surprised at Ron and Hermione. What was Ron thinking? He's acting like a total idiot. Who gives someone they love a spiked drink that they don't know is spiked? He deserved it when Hermione threw him out.

Author's Response: Thanks. Ron thought it would be funny to see his normally sober girlfriend drunk. He was wrong. Been there, done that :-(

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 08/14/15 22:47
Chapter: The Hunt: Den of Wolves

This is getting exciting. Of all the luck. Harry did not need that injury or to be discovered. I'm worried about Ginny also. Newspapers can be a pain especially if they expose something about a celebrity.

Author's Response: Thanks. This is, I hope, the point in the story where everything is going wrong for Harry. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/15/15 1:25
Chapter: The Snare: Three Caged Birds

What a great chapter. I guess Harry is practicing tough love. That headline was brutal. And, the word "another" was used showing bars had been trashed before. Poor Ron. He's so loyal to Ginny that he can't admit it was her fault she and Harry were covered in blood. Are you hinting that Ginny might have an alcohol problem?

Author's Response: The newspapers are hinting that Ginny has a drink problem. And that’s what Harry is reading into it. The question is, is that the whole story? -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/11/15 1:35
Chapter: The Hunt: Nice Weather for Fish

That was mean of Linny to report to Harry where Ginny was. He didn't need to know that. She seemed to delight in hinting that Ginny was at a party with someone. Neither Ginny or Harry seems very happy.

Author's Response: And once again you pick up on an important plot point, well done. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/11/15 1:07
Chapter: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

I think it was better that Harry usd the same sort of handcuffs on all three of the Harpies. Ginny was in the wrong. She had no business disrespecting Harry like that.

Author's Response: There is, of course, more to Ginny’s behaviour than meets the eye. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/09/15 1:23
Chapter: The Hunt: Wolf Hunt

Going into a werewolf camp doesn't seem like a very fun stakeout. I know they're not there for Auror entertainment but it sounds boring. I suppose there will be excitement and lots to do but also a lot of danger. I'd probably make a terrible Auror.

Author's Response: This is a tale of the early days of Harry’s career as an Auror. When he’s in charge he’ll make a lot of changes. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/09/15 0:57
Chapter: Interlude: Magpies in Flight

OMG! Ginny was in the pub that Harry was "raiding"? How embarrassing for both of them. Don't tell me she was the one who aimed a hex at Harry.

Author's Response: She was.

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