Reviews For Hunters and Prey
Reviewer: sejackson91
Date: 02/26/14 5:22
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Man I take a few months off reading fanfiction (almost a year to be fair I was traveling a lot and had to focus more on finishing college) and you add some new stories and finally finish hunters and prey! I was really excited to see it was done and you did a great job!! I particularly liked how it ties all the gang together for this one. I especially think the Robards/Hannah relationship is great. Although I really enjoy your family stories, you tell the best auror office stories. Great job, can't wait to read the next one.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and apologies for the delayed reply; I've had a busy few weeks.
You can expect more updates of Friends and Foes, and other stories, although it will be a while before you see either Robards or Hannah. I hope to get another Auror Office (at least an MIT) story done soon, too.

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 02/08/14 6:09
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Just finished, and it was a great read. Any idea when you'll be starting your sequel?

Author's Response: Thank you.
i started the sequel almost four weeks ago. :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/04/14 11:56
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Hehe, Love the end of the chapter. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thanks, more soon. We'll see how many of my unfinished stories I can mark as complete this year. -N-

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 02/04/14 11:39
Chapter: The Snare: The Foolish Pride of Lions

And the next chapter is not the conclusion of this last conversation lol. This is the most frustrating story I have read on this site, but in a good way. I love it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story was an experiment on my part. When I planned it, I realised that if I wrote from beginning to end in a straight line it would be action/adventure in the werewolf village, Harry/Ginny angst in Scotland and action at the village (and elsewhere) again. By flipping between the two I could have a "action" chapter and a "relationship" chapter. I've learned a lot.

Reviewer: MalchomMcGonagall
Date: 01/07/14 16:30
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

WOW! You finished this one in a sprint! And still up to your excellent standard. A little birdie told me that you have started Friends and Foes already,so does that mean that you are going to wait until you are finished with Strangers before you go back to Aurors & Schoolgirls? I am looking forward to the young Harry & Co. tracking down the Slytherins, but I'm dying to know how Fennella Grey got away with breaking into the Ministry!

Author's Response: Thank you.
I had intended to finish this story in 2013 but personal issues over the summer delayed me and, in the end the chapters came in a bit of a rush (for me, anyway - I’m not fast). To be honest, the prologue, and chapters 1, 2, 4 & 5 of F&F have been substantially done for more than 12 months. (Chapter 3 needs a complete rewrite.) I am currently working on both Strangers and A&S (and Epithalamium, a bit), and I’ll be sending the first few chapters of F&F to my beta soon.

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/06/14 17:26
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

This was such a good and intriguing story! I will definitely have to back through and read it from start to finish to get the whole picture!

I am looking forward to reading more from you of any story - all of them are so good!
- Katie

Author's Response: Thank you, Katie
Among (many) other things, I’m looking to tidy this story up a little. There are a few sections which need improvement.

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 01/05/14 17:52
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Good to see Terry Boot figure out Harry and Co. might have been a bit circumspect with regards to 'hunting' Finnella. Yup you can't find Harry's pad with out Ginny's help. Good chapter please Sir can we have more? Probably isn't the first time and won't be the last time Terry wonders what Harry's info flow priorities are. It is actually pretty simple who needs to know what and when does he need to get all the info to the DA (those Galleons still work).

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This story is now marked complete. However, you can expect a sequel: Friends and Foes, very soon. As for the DA Galleons, they’re a fairly basic communications device. Harry is looking for something better.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 01/04/14 12:16
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

I'm pretty much devoted to all your stories, but this one is amazing and oh my gosh!! There's more to come?! I can't wait!! Bloody brilliant fantastic writing!!! It should be a hardback on my bookshelf!

Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment, and thanks for being such a regular reviewer.
You should see the sequel very soon, but I’m also working on several of my other unfinished tales.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/04/14 8:39
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Great end to the story and nice to see Terry and Fenella getting together.
Looking forward to the follow up, there are still some nasties out there to be rounded up.

Author's Response: Thanks
I knew that Lavender and Mark were doomed (for the moment) so Terry and Fenella were the alternative. :-D Expect the sequel soon.

Reviewer: SilverDoe_IsoBell
Date: 01/04/14 5:22
Chapter: Finale: Friends and Foes

Great chapter - I love this story and it's plot! The inventions that you have created are imaginative and really entwine the muggle and wizarding world together. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks I’m glad you’ve enjoyed this, but there is no next chapter. It’s my second completed “novel” (I don’t count Tales of the Battle). There will, however, be a sequel. ;-D -N-

Reviewer: Betamax
Date: 01/04/14 3:52
Chapter: Introduction: Dogged Pursuit

Nice conclusion to the H&P. I've been reading this story since the beginning and it was entertaining the entire way through. Nice work.

I'm trying to remember, was Goyle killing Colin part of the cannon or your fiction? Either way it's nice to see that part of the story get introduced.

Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I've certainly tried to entertain.
Goyle killing Colin happened in "Tales of the Battle" so far as I know it's not canon. I'm pretty certain I made it up, mainly because JKR identified the Killers of Fred, Tonks, and Lupin.

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 12/22/13 21:38
Chapter: Aftermath: Truths and Consequences

I figured the after action review was going to go south. For crying out loud Dumbledore's Army ws better organized at Collin's funeral (Grave Days) the delay on the ministy end was insane. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I'm glad you think that the DA were better organised, Harry agrees. Change is needed. More soon.

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 12/22/13 12:07
Chapter: Aftermath: Truths and Consequences

Another great chapter, things are really working out now.
What's in Fenella's letter? Will she nail the baddies? Hope so!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. With most of the loose ends tied up, all you need to know is what Fenella is doing. You'll find out soon. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/19/13 13:00
Chapter: Prey: The Strange Snake Bites

Ahhh, I cannot believe how quickly the end is coming! Great story and fantastic chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thanks, only two more chapters to go! -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/19/13 12:58
Chapter: Prey: An Owl and two Alpha Males

Very exciting towards the end of the chapter! Love it

Author's Response: :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/19/13 11:51
Chapter: Prey: An Owl and two Alpha Males

Very exciting towards the end of the chapter! Love it

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you thought so. -N-

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 12/19/13 11:30
Chapter: Prey: Lioness Snarls, Badger Baited

I am very glad to be catching up again on this story. Thanks for sharing it with all your readers :-)

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. After a long delay, the end is in sight. -N-

Reviewer: fi103r
Date: 12/14/13 22:48
Chapter: Prey: The Strange Snake Bites

Great keep up the good work. Last death eater goes down. Looks like Auror tactics will get rehashed in the after acton review. Bit of a zero sum when the target has no scruples. Hmmm what is Fenilla up to? May we have more please sir?

Author's Response: Thanks. There are two more chapters, and both are being beta read, so you may see the end of this story before 2014. What is Fenella up to? You'll find out in the final chapter. -N-

Reviewer: trigg
Date: 12/14/13 7:06
Chapter: Prey: The Strange Snake Bites

Thanks. Great chapter. Ron's idea of cutting the girl's hair is brilliant. Hope, the boy will recover and Fenella is okay.

Author's Response: Thanks, you'll find out about Ross in the next chapter. -N-

Reviewer: desertsol98
Date: 12/13/13 12:54
Chapter: Prey: The Strange Snake Bites

I was so happy to see that this story was updated again! Totally made my morning.

Another great chapter. I really liked how it was Ron who managed to free to girl. Lestrange was sufficiently cruel. Potter and Weaslys quick thinking was quite in charecter.

I must say I really really really really enjoyed Mark and Lavender's first meeting.

It seems that capturing of Lestrange' and its aftermath leads to so many helpful changes in the Auror protocol, love it. I really like that.

I could go on and on, but I best get back to work.

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

Ron's rescue plan is one of the few things which have survived from my original outline for this story. The circumstances of Mark and Lavender's first meeting was always their, too. But in the time between starting the story and this chapter the method of Mark's arrival changed completely.

There are two chapters to go, and you're right about the changes to Auror protocol.


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