Reviewer: harry4lif
Date: 07/26/12 6:43
Chapter: Prologue

Hey there,

I must say, I love James/Lily pairing, so I had to read the prologue. You have a good start here, and it makes me curious as to what your plot line is. I’ve never personally read a story like this, so maybe that’s part of the appeal.

There isn’t much to say, because it’s just a prologue and it’s so short, but it does start to make the reader wonder, and it leaves it with a cliffhanger. I mean, what book could possibly make this happen? What would possess her to leave Hogwarts and her friends behind? Especially if she seems to be friends with the Marauders.

This prologue raises so many questions. I don’t know if you’ll ever finish this story, but if you do, I will try to keep an eye out for it to read it. Good job on the prologue!

~Alyssa

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 10/23/11 14:31
Chapter: Prologue

I really really really like it so far! Cant wait!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: thank you, i'm glad you like it! there is more to come soon! thanks for reviewing, i really appreciate it :)

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