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Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/04/12 22:10
Chapter: The Sorting

It was another good chapter, though it would have been cool to see Albus, Rose, and Scorpius in a differen house then there parents...

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/04/12 21:53
Chapter: Off to the Express

That chapter was good! I liked how you changed it from the original version JKR had. It was similar to the original version, but you added some twists to it which I also enjoyed! I can't wait until I read the next chapter!(:

Reviewer: snowsbane
Date: 10/30/11 4:13
Chapter: The Sorting

"I'll eat myself..." What an awesome poem by the Sorting Hat!

Author's Response: That's not my poem, sadly..:) it's the one the hat sang in Harry Potter and The Sorcerer's/Philosepher's Stone, I gave the credit for it to JK Rowling in the chapter note.

Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 10/29/11 22:43
Chapter: The Sorting

Cool! You're a good writer! I like how you potrayed Hermione as a mum ;P

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I tried. XD

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 10/29/11 3:04
Chapter: The Sorting

I love Next-Gen fics a LOT, so I read practically everyone I can find. This one is pretty good, but I did have a few issues with the characters. They are all so stereotyped, with Malfoy as a mean Slytherin, Rose and Al as lovely nice Gryffindors, and Jenna, Luna's daughter, as a dotty sort of person. I know that "the apple doesn't fall far from the tree", but the apple does detach itself from the tree. It's a different thing. And sometimes it can be interesting when the apple is carried away by the wind. So far your characters seem like their parents in miniature, and I hope that changes because this story seems like it could be really interesting.

Author's Response: Yeah... I had actually started noticing that too. And I do intend to change basically all of them. Like Scorpius... I intend for him to come around. This is my first fanfic so I'm still getting the hang of some things. But I promise, it'll get better! <3 Thank you for your feedback, it is truly appreciated!

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