Reviews For Magic Tricks
Reviewer: FearlessFlyer
Date: 01/13/12 4:34
Chapter: Magic Tricks

I love this continuation of Rabbit Test, and would like to see more of our heroine in future stories. Nice job!

Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks fore reviewing, even though it took me over a year to realize you had!

Reviewer: sas__x
Date: 10/15/11 16:12
Chapter: Magic Tricks

I really really enjoyed this story! Am I right in thinking that this is either a continuation of something or something is going to follow it? I really hope so anyway. I have some small nit picks. I take it your not from Britain's as I noticed this

"instead of my sensible flats"

Here in Britain we wouldn't call them flats, rather flat shoes. Also, I noticed you used the word 'dating'. In Britain we mainly just say 'going out with'.

Apart from that I really enjoyed this. You made a muggle posing as a witch seem really credible which is an achievement as I never thought it possible. I love how you show that George is still raw from Freds death and I love hocharacterisederised Molly, she was perfect.

Author's Response: Yes, indeed, I am not from Britain. I will update with "flat shoes" and "going out with". The other story with the same character and situation is "Rabbit Test". Thank you for reviewing! Perhaps one day there will be a follow-up. I had said when I completed "Rabbit Test" that it was a one shot, and that was it. But here we are again!

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