Reviewer: wannabefictionwriter_13
Date: 11/27/11 4:59
Chapter: One-Shot

...All I can say is fantastic.

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 11/06/11 6:04
Chapter: One-Shot

This was a very enjoyable and amusing story... I have to say that I really believed Jenny was a Muggle... at least initially. When Alicia first mentioned Quidditch, I was suspicious, but I wondered if you'd just made a mistake, but it was her thoughts about pounds technically coming from trees that made me realise.

I loved the idea of someone getting back at Fred and George - highly amusing, although no doubt at least Fred will be keen to get the two girls back again.

I loved the bit when Fred and George were making names up for themselves... it feels like the kind of silly thing they would do.

I think you did a great job with the dialogue, which often carried the story, and always felt natural for the characters, even though what Fred and George said was occasionally ludicrous... but then, that is really part of their characters.

Usually in canon we see them in control of situations - basking in the success of a prank - so I smiled at George improvising, and initially thinking he was quite good and then realising he had made a complete mess of it.

Great job with the characters and making this an amusing and enjoyable read.

~Katrina

Author's Response: Thank you! Your comment made me re-read my story and gain a whole new perspective on it. I can't read the story without noticing the hints I dropped about Jenny being a witch, because I know they're there. But from an outside perspective, her identity could technically be in doubt until the very end, which adds a new twist. I've always thought Fred and George deserved to be the victims for once :)

Reviewer: Morrigan Nicole
Date: 10/18/11 21:07
Chapter: One-Shot

cute!!!!

Reviewer: Trucker
Date: 10/16/11 6:57
Chapter: One-Shot

Almost Like Perfection? Nah... it WAS perfect!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I spent a lot of time making it just right :)

Reviewer: sam_1034_lily
Date: 10/13/11 0:13
Chapter: One-Shot

This was awesome. I really enjoyed the prank.

Author's Response: Thank you! I wasn't sure when I started that I'd be able to think of a prank, but I guess years of reading about Fred and George's helped.

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