Reviewer: Yurippe
Date: 01/01/14 14:12
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Brilliant!

Reviewer: Selene Sparks
Date: 06/07/12 0:47
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Love this so much! I'd love it if you did a longer story of James and Lilly.

Reviewer: leckleck
Date: 04/29/12 17:04
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Really well written, perfect length not to mention that you captured the characters in exactly the way that I would have imagined! Brilliant :)

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 03/05/12 23:51
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Fantastic!

Reviewer: hockey_star
Date: 02/25/12 3:50
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

How adorable :)

Reviewer: Dracoisbeast
Date: 01/22/12 5:03
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

It's a sweet story. Really quite clever and well thought-out. I enjoyed reading it, all of it!

Reviewer: Jupiter13
Date: 12/02/11 3:01
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

This was really great :)

Reviewer: lastmarauder
Date: 10/27/11 18:29
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

awww...the end is soooo nice! :D

Reviewer: ljlove
Date: 10/12/11 5:15
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

when i saw the plotline of this story, i thought it was just going to be some dumb immature thing. but now i know it was really well thought out and a great metaphor. i'm glad i read it and really enjoyed it! great job!

~el

Reviewer: Lily_Jean_Weasley95
Date: 10/05/11 22:59
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

This was adorable! I loved it, truly. I'll never be able to see Quidditch the same way again. Very weel written, and a wonderful story.Brilliant. Completely and Utterly Brilliant. :)

Author's Response: Aha, I hope I changed your views on Quidditch in a *good* way! Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: I hate Tuney
Date: 10/03/11 8:55
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

I loved the analogy!! And I caught the meaning of it in the end of the chapter with a memory from the Fifth book where Rowling presented James drawing a snitch with an L.E below it!
very clever of you! well done!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story (and even more glad that you caught the OOTP reference) =D

Reviewer: Mom2Rose
Date: 10/02/11 20:40
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

I agree with the other reviewers. I w just waiting for James to reveal that Lily was the Snitch. Maybe that's how this James proposes :p

Author's Response: Aha, great insight! I'm glad you enjoyed the story - thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Angus135
Date: 10/02/11 12:24
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Such a beautiful story!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 10/01/11 21:14
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

This was an enjoyable and playful story, which worked really well. Your tone was light and humorous the whole way through.

The analogy was very clever and perfect for this relationship - it added another reason to why James always has that Snitch with him, too, despite being a Chaser. It was clever, and I particularly liked how you aligned Lily with the Snitch... I'd never thought of it this way.

I liked the way James misunderstood what Lily meant when she refused him - it's a bit cliche, particularly in James/Lily stories, but considering the playful tone of this fic I think that really worked.

I smiled at how Lily could remember the tactic she'd overheard, even though she probably had hardly understood it, and yet didn't know what a Quaffle was. I did find that a bit unbelievable... surely she would know at least the basics? Although I suppose she could have been pretending to know less to flirt with James?

I just have a few tiny nitpicks - you've written though he was more sympathetic towards Jenkins' girl troubles than the lack of support he gets from his mates. - since your story is in past tense, it should be "got from his mates".

'Oh, is that so?' said lily, - you just missed capitalising Lily.

Anyway, they're just tiny things, the story was very enjoyable and well-written.

~Katrina

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, I'm glad you enjoyed the story :) And I appreciate the helpful hints! I'll have them fixed as soon as I can.

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 10/01/11 17:34
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Such an amazing story, I can TOTALLY imagine James getting Lily EXACTLY like this. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 10/01/11 10:28
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

That was adorable. It was cute and well written and the whole Quidditch analogy was a lot of fun. Of course Lily would turn out to be the Snitch at the end! Lovely job!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Ahaa, well there had to be some reason why James carried that Snitch around with him everywhere! I'm glad you liked the story :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Abigail Weasley
Date: 10/01/11 10:12
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

I like the analogy of the story. Great idea! The end of the chapter was adorable too. ;)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 10/01/11 9:06
Chapter: Quidditch: The Metaphoric Dating Game

Ooooh, that was awesome! I loved it! *runs to read more of your stories*

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

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