Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 10/25/11 13:36
Chapter: Chapter 3

WOW!!!!!! It certainly is an evil spot to end!

Author's Response: I really hope that you like the next chapter and thanks for sending me a review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 10/19/11 20:04
Chapter: Chapter 2

Very inertaining. I like your take on the characters.

Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you are enjoying the story! :) Thank you for the review and I hope that you like the next chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 10/19/11 2:21
Chapter: Chapter 2

Wow. Very good chapter, but I didn't really like some of the discussion topics. I am dying to know who the postman dude is who is stalking Celie. Please tell me!!! Also, how long will it be until the next chapter is out?

Author's Response: It's nice to hear from you again! :) I'm sorry that there were parts that you didn't care for in this chapter; I really hope that Chapter 3 is more to your liking. As to the postman, all of your questions about him will be answered in the next chapter. I've already submitted Chapter 3 to the queue, so hopefully it will be approved by the moderators very soon. Thanks for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 10/17/11 1:45
Chapter: Chapter 2

Another wonderful chapter! The scenes in the pub, at the shower & in the cellar were both humorous & serious and gave them a lot to think about. I'm looking forward to the birth of the girls & finding out what you're naming them.

You gave us just enough about the evil postman to make us more curious than before. Can't wait to find out what he wants.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time out of your day to send me another review! I appreciate it and I really look forward to hearing your thoughts about the latest chapter! :) I'm thrilled to hear that you enjoyed the chapter's funny and dramatic moments. The birth will be coming up in Chapter 4 and, as to the mysterious postman, he will be making his much-anticipated appearance in the next chapter. Thanks for being such a faithful reader and reviewer! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/16/11 1:14
Chapter: Chapter 2

Hurry! I want to read the rest! I likey!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear that you are enjoying the story! :) Thank you for sending me a review and I hope that you like the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/16/11 1:07
Chapter: Chapter 2

I was nearly rolling on the floor laughing at the pub and shower scenes!! Fantastic! I really loved that bit between Lucious and Snape in cellar! Amazing job with this!!!

Author's Response: As always, thank you for taking the time to send me a review. I always look forward to hearing your thoughts about the latest chapter! :) I'm so happy that you enjoyed the humor in the chapter - I laughed quite hard myself while writing it! Also, I'm relieved to hear that you liked the serious scene at the end between Snape and Lucius. While penning this chapter, I really wanted to have Snape express his uncertainty about his impending fatherhood in a believable way. Thanks a million for your continued support and enthusiasm! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: thornytorynx
Date: 10/15/11 2:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

AAH, I've been waiting for this SO LONG!! Love it!! More soon please!

Author's Response: I'm so glad to hear from you again! :) When I posted this chapter, I thought of you because you've been so excited about the appearance of those "pink lines." I hope that this sequel lives up to your high expectations! :) Thanks for sticking with me! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Amelia_Bones
Date: 10/08/11 3:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

Ooooh a little cliffie....
Can't wait for the baby shower. Severus should saute' the sprouts with some mushrooms. They're much better that way. :-)

Author's Response: It's good to hear from you again! :) Thank you for the review and I hope that you enjoy the next chapter. As for your suggestion about the mushrooms, I'll pass your recipe on to Severus... Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: stormygirl
Date: 10/06/11 15:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

Great start! I'm anxiously waiting for this one to continue.

Author's Response: I'm so happy to hear that you are liking this sequel, so far! :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter - I'll give you a hint and tell you that there are some very funny moments coming up for Severus and Celie. Thank you for the review! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Jaspergirl2010
Date: 10/04/11 18:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Please give me more!!!!!! I have always loved your stories!!!

Author's Response: More is on the way! Thank you for letting me know how much you are enjoying my writing! :) I appreciate the review and I hope that you like the next chapter! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 10/03/11 21:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a fabulous story! I have been reading it ever since I found it, and I think I am in love with your writing! Please hurry and write the next chapter, I want to know their daughters! (Is there going to be q sequel about the daughters going to school?)

Author's Response: Thank you for such a sweet review! :) I'm really thrilled to hear that you are enjoying my writing! The next chapter is on the way and I hope that it also meets your approval. In answer to your question, I have some ideas for future sequels featuring the Snape daughters rattling around in my head, but I haven't begun writing anything specific yet (I'm trying to finish this story first). Never fear, I will definitely post something about the girls as they grow up! (More information will be provided at a later date...so stay tuned!) Thanks for the review and for all of your wonderful support and enthusiasm! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Liet Dumbledore
Date: 10/03/11 21:28
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is a fabulous story! I have been reading it ever since I found it, and I think I am in love with your writing! Please hurry and write the next chapter, I want to know their daughters! (Is there going to be q sequel about the daughters going to school?)

Author's Response: My in-depth reply to your review is posted with your other review for this chapter, but I want to thank you for your enthusiasm for the story! :) I hope that you enjoy the next chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: Kaitlyn Snape
Date: 10/03/11 21:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

AWESOME!!!!!! But I'm dying to know who the man is. You just cant leave that type of cliff hanger. It's not fair.

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that you are enjoying the first segment of the new sequel! :) You will learn more information about the mystery man in Chapters 2 and 3. I'm sorry about the cliffhanger, but I do like to string the tension out a bit for my super readers. :) I hope that you like the next chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: bearfoot
Date: 10/03/11 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love the way you describe Snape's mixed feelings about being a father. Wizard or Muggle, the uncertainty of how things will work out is always a concern.

His happiness about daughters over sons, really fit his personality. The suggestion of Harriet & Rona as names was very clever, even as a joke.

And the ending...What a cliffhanger! A few more clues next time would be nice, that is if we'd know him.

And, as a reader & sometime reviewer, I really appreciate that you take time to comment on each review. Thank you.

Author's Response: Thank you for such a complimentary review, bearfoot! :) I'm really relieved to hear that you think Snape's reactions to impending fatherhood are appropriate for his character; it has always been my goal to write Snape as truthfully as possible, given the fact that my stories are as Alternate Universe as they come. I, too, enjoyed the Harriet and Rona quip - I had to taunt Snape just a little bit! :) Regarding the cliffhanger, more information is coming - albeit slowly - in the next few chapters about the mystery man, who will have a starring role in Chapters 3 and 4. (No more hints!) Finally, I think that responding to each of my reviews is the least that I can do to show my deep appreciation for any and all feedback that I receive from the readers. Thanks for continuing to read my stories and I really hope that you enjoy the rest of this sequel! :) Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 10/03/11 15:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

I like it lots!!! Ooooooo can't wait to hear about the evil man!!

Author's Response: I'm so excited to hear that you are liking the new sequel so far! :) More information will be forthcoming in Chapters 2 and 3 about the "evil" man. I hope that you enjoy the next chapter! Smiles, Ruby Emeralds

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