Reviews For Vigilance!
Reviewer: socks2
Date: 03/08/13 8:31
Chapter: Vigilance!

Wow, this even sounds like him!! This is really great!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I tried very hard to channel him :)

Reviewer: Nagini Riddle
Date: 09/28/12 21:26
Chapter: Vigilance!

I had a lot of fun reading this! It was very conversational and even though it was about vigilance, it felt not as dark as many poems about fighting are. But that can be a very good thing! It shows that even amidst terror and chaos, there can still be laughs and fun. It is how we cope with our trials that define who we are, and I think this poem does a good job of showing that, especially since you chose a character who was tough and willing to stand up for what he felt was right. :)
Great job!

~Nagini Riddle

Author's Response: Thank you. One of the things I loved about Moody was his biting sarcastic wit even in his dire seriousness. Wonderful character.

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