Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 04/19/12 20:19
Chapter: That Your Friends Would Forgive You

that was geat.i cant wait to read more :D

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 04/13/12 16:49
Chapter: That Your Friends Would Forgive You

Yay! I'm so glad that everything is being worked out! And I'm really happy that Lily and James are finally moving forward... :) Great story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Reviewer: dragongurl
Date: 04/01/12 20:25
Chapter: I Think You'd Find

Ahhh!!! SO good! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Next chapter is in the queue so should hopefully be up soon.

Reviewer: RideTheLightning
Date: 03/21/12 16:31
Chapter: I Think You'd Find

Another awesome chapter! I really like the way you write remus, he's still very in character even though its AU - great job! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like Remus. Lately he's been one of the harder characters for me to write.

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 03/19/12 19:44
Chapter: I Think You'd Find

this fic is great.you've done a differenet job.and i'm soo glad to read it update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it and don't mind how AU it is.

Reviewer: Hermione Jean Weasley
Date: 03/19/12 18:27
Chapter: I Think You'd Find

I love this story! I get so excited when I see a new chapter up. I can't wait to see what happens now. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you like it.

Reviewer: RideTheLightning
Date: 02/26/12 20:53
Chapter: Just Give Up and Admit You're An Asshole

aww kinda sad and bitterly ironic at the end :( love this story, you've written it amazingly well!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it was sad at the end, but there will be happy parts, too.

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 02/24/12 3:02
Chapter: Just Give Up and Admit You're An Asshole

Aww this chapter was so sad. :( can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, it is a sad chapter, but things get better... although they get worse, also...

Reviewer: mysticpen
Date: 02/15/12 0:34
Chapter: You Actually Believe That They Are Real

this is an amazing story. i am literally hooked onto every single word and the plot keeps getting better and better!

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you like it.

Reviewer: Hermione Jean Weasley
Date: 02/13/12 22:14
Chapter: You Actually Believe That They Are Real

I absolutely love this chapter. This story is amazing! I cannot wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you like it so far.

Reviewer: Andie_Ravenclaw
Date: 02/05/12 19:07
Chapter: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces

I REALLY like this story- Can't wait 'til chapter 11 :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I finally got the next chapter submitted, so it should be up soon.

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/27/12 19:41
Chapter: Is That While You're Telling Me Stories

Great chapter! I don't understand what upset Lily so much, but I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks! Lily's feelings will be explained some in the next chapter (and the one after it). So that should hopefully clear things up for you.

Reviewer: RideTheLightning
Date: 01/23/12 22:17
Chapter: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces

really cool story and great pace, i love james/lily fics and this one is really original - great job! looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you like it. I'm always a little worried about the AUness, so it's nice to hear people still like the story.

Reviewer: evoevoevo
Date: 01/22/12 8:17
Chapter: What Scares Me

UPDATE MORE OFTEN !!!!! things are getting reallllly good.

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue, so hopefully it will be up soon.

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/21/12 20:37
Chapter: Is That You Believe What You're Saying

Great bit on the right path versus the easy one! You've done a great job of developing Lily's character :)

Author's Response: Thanks for all the reviews! I'm glad you're liking the story so far.

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/21/12 20:35
Chapter: What Bugs Me

I liked James's Quidditch tryout scene, but I wasn't sure that I liked how the Slytherin was the bad guy. Still, I enjoyed how you emphasized the whole rather than the individual, and I liked how Lily had to confront Emma's prejudice with the Wolfsbane potion.

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/21/12 20:29
Chapter: But I've Got No Problem With That, Really

I love this twist! In the books it was Snape who discovered it, so now I'm really curious to see what happens. I liked Sirius and Lily's exchange over Remus and I can't wait to read more :)

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/21/12 20:25
Chapter: You Lie, to My Face of All Places

I love the Remus part in this chapter; he's one of my favorite characters, and I've never thought about how hard his life must have been, being a werewolf. I liked how Lily wanted to help him and how his friends do, too, even if they're not quite sure how to do it. Great chapter!

Reviewer: onetinsoldier
Date: 01/21/12 20:15
Chapter: You Can't Hide Behind Social Graces

Great first chapter! I like your premise, and I like how you show both sides of James, the arrogant "toe rag" and the good, loyal friend he can be.

Reviewer: juniper
Date: 01/03/12 2:43
Chapter: What Bothers Me

LOL'd at Vanessa, winced at Peter. Good job! Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks! Vanessa's going to stick around for a few chapters, so there will be more of her. And more of Peter's dilemma as well.

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